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Published: 2006-02-23 01:31:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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What I'm currently working on. I'm sort of making it up as I go. Feel free to make suggestions for the final piece.Related content
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lalalalalalalala - i love critiquing!!!!
First off, GREAT color palette. I feel like it's some sort of demented bunny that's going to kill everybody, and I say that in the best possible way there can be to say that. Good use of shadows - I HATE YOU PHOTOSHOHP PEOPLE!!!! - lol, j/k - but watch the tongue area. It's looking a wee bit flat. and watch using actual black for a shadow. It tends to flatten the area rather than throw it into shadow, so use a tinted black instead (like one that's a bit more purple). ...That, and something that pale isn't going to get that dark. Check out the shadows on an egg if you don't believe me.
Um, yeah, that's it except for YOU FINISHING IT!! 
(ps - "your" song was on during this whole critique
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