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Puffun — Variations, episode 1

Published: 2006-03-05 02:23:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 49
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Description This is a class project, one of hopefully 4 parts. I am varying the story of someone who wins something and then eats something in celebration. This is part one, or rather, it is the first thing I did. I don't think this'll be the first one in the complete collection.
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beefgir [2006-03-05 03:26:30 +0000 UTC]

oh ya, and for the miny view i would do the halo sniper view. the pic of your head just lookes like another head drawing like the last one. if u do the halo thing it will look cooler

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beefgir [2006-03-05 03:25:11 +0000 UTC]

criteak time!!!!
way to go, really great!
small points. when your arm reaches back, it almost disapears.
2, the head turning is to chopy, add another point inbetween that so its a bit smother.
3. the voice.... didnt work. take ouyt the voice and it will be alot better. the high pitched voice dosnt go with the tone of everything else.
other than that, great job!

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