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Qlockwork — Civil War: Audition: Part 4
Published: 2009-09-15 00:14:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1543; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 28
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Please, tell me if you find any bad grammar or bad spelling. English isn't my first language, so I appriciate it if you find any wrongs.Finally. I totally overdid this, I know. But damn, it went so much faster to draw pages this way. With no inking ans shit. I also didn't have a script when I drew this, which I usually do. Kinda came up with things as I drew. I had forgotten how fun it is to draw comics that way.
Though, I think I should plan it a little better. It felt like things went a bit too fast here and there. But it's okay. I do this to learn.
Also, you see that the shading style changes, right? Well .. it's because I havn't used a computer to draw seriously in like three years or more. In other words: I have no style. xD Hell ... I don't even have photoshop. I use SAI and paint.net. And SAI is actually pretty funny. I might buy a tablet. Hope it will make my fingers hurt less.
And if you wonder about the lyrics in part 3. It's Lascia che'io pianga by Händel. In an english translation. Or ... a mix of all the english translations I've found. It's an awesome song anyway.
And Jamir was so, fun, fun to draw. 8D I like him.
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: --- end of "Vagabonds are coming to town" ---
Civil War ---> *CivilWar-OCT
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Comments: 40
this was a truly awesome entry, congrats on making the cut!
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Thanks a lot. And congratz to you too. I secretly hoped that you'd get in. Camo is just so cute. C:
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thank you! here's hoping we face one another!
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Yeah. Some robot action is always awesome.
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*Gasp*
LU!
I shall watch this series keenly! Lu is my fave :}
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And Lu doesn't really give a shit. :I But I do. Thanks a lot.
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Oh wow! 8D
HOMG. I WANT MOAR. I can't wait to see what these two manage to cook up in this tourny!! <3
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There will be moar in round 1! Well. If I make it. xP
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>8D I think you'll get in, personally. 8D
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OH MY GOODNESS!
this was BEYONG AMAZING! i love the art, the characters and the dialogue was EXCELLENT!
all in all...
I LOVED IT!
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Haha, thanks a lot. I try to do my best. xP And thanks a lot for the watch too!
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your welcomes
you deserved it! your art is AMAZING!
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You're so fast....! 
The little robot is so cute <3 (I don't remember the name, sorry..... something with "W"?)
and Lu... well, she reminds me of you a lot xD or what I know about you, of course...
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Well, it could have been much worse. Everything here is just doodles, so it doesn't take that long.
His name is Gakka. xD And yes, I find him pretty cute too.
Reminds of me? Haha. I didn't know my personality was that bad. xD
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no, it's not that bad... I've always found some of you in Ayumie aswell. I suppose it's like children-parents alike... or maybe you -unconciously or not- give some of yourself to them. I don't know if you're aware xD but I, who am a watcher from the distance, see it...
You sometimes say that too about some of my pictures and I'm not aware xD but I trust that outer point of view.
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heh, I was just kidding (mostly).But it's true what you say. It would be impossible to create something without putting a bit of oneself in it.
And, yes, yes. I can never know how I look like in other people's eyes. xD
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...I hate the world-ansiktet är så mycket awesome. xD
Och applåd på serien! Fan, vill också ha tid att göra nåt sånt här. D:
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Tack, tack. Det är najs att höra. :3 Jag vill också att du ska ha tid! Men jag vet att det är svårt. Men det kommer väl nån gång. Förhoppningsvis.
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it would be interesting if they met Thornak... he doesn't like war either...
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Well, that could mean a non-violent solution ... but I can't help but to think that it still could end as a real mess. :d Especialy since he doesn't like liars.
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Just because he doesn't like them doesn't mean he'll beat them up... he knows one.
It probably would be a big mess in the end...
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Nah, I didn't think that either.
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he might yell though.
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ARRGH my heads exploding D:< how are new people like me supposed to compete with THAT!
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Do your best and never give up! 8D Besides, even if one looses, you've always gained some expreince and learned something. At least that's what i think. And a big reason why I decided to join the OCT. xP (along with all the other stuff of course)
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Well said 
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No, I was into another OCT not that long ago, called Tower of revival. I lost in round 2 though, so I can't say that I have very high expectations when it comes to something big as this. But in ToR, my first oppenent forfeited and my second one was a writer, so I never really got to compete with other comic artists, so that's something I look forward to now. :3
And that's my way too. Never give up wihtout putting up a fight.
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Heh, well If you Artificial and my Exhuman were to get in, I'd look forward to competing against you 
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Thanks. Good luck to you too.
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Oh wow, sweet interpretation of Jamir. And sweet entry all around! Loved the bit with Argo killing the guys that had him cornered. And all that battle stuff at the start. And the confusion with the "artificials".
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Thanks a lot, I'm trying to do my best.
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Now for a real comment!
It is amazing to see Lu involved in this war, it just makes me wonder how far she'll get, what she'll do and more...
I am already dying out of anxiety, can't wait!
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First of all: thank you so much for pointing out my typos! 8D I've fixed them now. Most of them were mistakes (like, my never-ending struggle aginst "expect" and "except" ... even though I know the difference very well), but I just suck at fidning them myself. :I So thanks a lot, again.
And I'm glad to hear that you liked it too. I hope that I'll be able to last a little bit longer this time. xP
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Not a problem!
You just have to give your best, this time I can say things are getting rough, or you should expect them too. (what with the war and all lol, just joking)
I see Mr. Ben Fleuter has given you some positive input! That's very good!
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Yes, I think so too, so I do my best not to get any too high expectations. xD But still, it will be fun to try my skills against other comic artists, something I never had the chance to in ToR ...
You mean ~Beanjamish ? Yeah. That's pretty cool. I'm quite the fan of his work too.
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Typo search service:
When Lu says that the "Artificials" wasn't artificial, it should be weren't
2 pannels later she says "you should have looked up who these Artificials was..." it should be were
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I like it when you overdo things >.>
A fantastic audition for one of my favorite characters; I’m happy to see that Lu hasn’t changed much since her trials and tribulations in the tower. I’m really looking forward to seeing what she does in this environment. Her unique brand of sarcasm and introspection is definitely going to take her far.
I love your comic, I love your style.
Keep it up and I hope I see you in the tournament
Oh! and your english is fine. you probably have a better grasp of English then most Americans. To my shame
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Thanks a lot. Yes, Lu hasn't changed too much. The core is thill left, but I don't think she'll go off holding wacky philosophy lessons anymore. At least not too big ones. xP
Well ... I know my english is pretty good. But I will still always make a mistake or two (or ten). Which is one or two (or then) too many. Hate typos. xP
And I hope to see you in the tournament too! Also: Good luck in the finals of ToR. I'm cheering for you and Lucifer. xP
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