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Here's a redesign of Angstrom. I think I did better than before.

Bio - Angstrom Gravestone, a dragon born to be a soldier after hearing stories from his father and grandfather. When he was a child, he would pretend to be a soldier fighting to protect others until he was finally able to join the military. He train vigorously and was able to join his fellow soldiers to defend the world he grew up in from darkness. During one of these battles, the platoon of 45 soldiers he was in had been nearly wiped out until 18 of them were left. Angstrom, however didn't give up when the others had and fought with determined ferocity and won, though not without earning a scar across his eye. This act of courage earned him the rank of General. After his promotion, he began to lead platoons and battalions successfully against the forces of darkness, gaining scars from the battles he led. During one of his reconnaissance mission, he heard of a village that had been destroyed. Once at the village, he ordered the small group of soldiers he brought to search the surrounding area, looking around until he found a young dragon passed out and injured. After returning to the city he lived in, governed by nomadic dragons, he was told by the dragon that his name is Alistair and that he had been captured along with the other children, infected with darkness; turning the wings from their natural color to black and blood red as well as clouding their minds and training them to become soldiers. When Alistair was finished explaining, they went to the leaders and offered to care for the child. After getting something to eat, they went back to Angstrom's home where he raised Alistair and taught him how to defend himself. Throughout the next 16 years, Angstrom continued to raise Alistair until he was an adult, however during these years, he suffered a terrible injury that forced him to retire from the military, however he decides to open a small restaurant/home for him and the dragons of the city, giving his home to Alistair, and still carries the respect he carried as a general. However despite his retirement he still wishes he could be on the battlefield with his fellow soldiers, even it means it becomes his last.

Description
Here's a redesign of Angstrom. I think I did better than before.

Bio - Angstrom Gravestone, a dragon born to be a soldier after hearing stories from his father and grandfather. When he was a child, he would pretend to be a soldier fighting to protect others until he was finally able to join the military. He train vigorously and was able to join his fellow soldiers to defend the world he grew up in from darkness. During one of these battles, the platoon of 45 soldiers he was in had been nearly wiped out until 18 of them were left. Angstrom, however didn't give up when the others had and fought with determined ferocity and won, though not without earning a scar across his eye. This act of courage earned him the rank of General. After his promotion, he began to lead platoons and battalions successfully against the forces of darkness, gaining scars from the battles he led. During one of his reconnaissance mission, he heard of a village that had been destroyed. Once at the village, he ordered the small group of soldiers he brought to search the surrounding area, looking around until he found a young dragon passed out and injured. After returning to the city he lived in, governed by nomadic dragons, he was told by the dragon that his name is Alistair and that he had been captured along with the other children, infected with darkness; turning the wings from their natural color to black and blood red as well as clouding their minds and training them to become soldiers. When Alistair was finished explaining, they went to the leaders and offered to care for the child. After getting something to eat, they went back to Angstrom's home where he raised Alistair and taught him how to defend himself. Throughout the next 16 years, Angstrom continued to raise Alistair until he was an adult, however during these years, he suffered a terrible injury that forced him to retire from the military, however he decides to open a small restaurant/home for him and the dragons of the city, giving his home to Alistair, and still carries the respect he carried as a general. However despite his retirement he still wishes he could be on the battlefield with his fellow soldiers, even it means it becomes his last.