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NemeHex In reply to ??? [2016-09-14 19:27:40 +0000 UTC]

(lol, I mean I kinda have a character for him and I wouldnt mind but, shes a little to unstable and a little too childish for avok so it wouldnt work. Also Im making this piccolo be a bit like bardock in the sense, that he knows who your character is, makes things a bit more interesting I think, if not then you can scratch what i posted.)

Piccolo: "You tend no to listen to reason, much like.... vegeta." he thought about it but dismissed it. "So tell me, what are you doing here?" 

(I wondered the same thing, about the part of the story of dbz if there was always ment to be a goten in the future, what happened to him in trunks time. ive also been thinking maybe goku and vegeta arent dead, maybe they became and stayed as vegitto)

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-14 19:41:43 +0000 UTC]

(It's alright, I get that she's rather speific x3 And Avok's on the other hand way too calm for her. Nothing wrong with that yo. Oooh, so he already knows ho she is? That sure mightbe interesting~ )

VaaL: She stared at Piccolo for few way too long seconds. She still didn't get used to how tall this guy was. Uneblievable. "It figures." she finally spoke up as her eyes drifted to fighting Saiyans. "We're half siblings after all. There was a short circuit in my machine when I was going back to the future. It got me end up in this alternate story." she explained. And if Piccolo talked to Avok earlier, then it was easy to pick up that she didn't tell this to Avok. Even if this was future Piccolo, she still trusted him enough to tell him more without much hesitation.

(Well, they didn't say anything about Goten yet, as well in dbz and dbs. They mentioned Gohan but that was all. Forever aVegitto? While idea sounds great, I feel so sorry for Bulma and Chichi )

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-14 19:56:13 +0000 UTC]

(XD oh hes got his anger issues lol, yesh idk yet, XD I like piccolo he is very awesome lol)

Piccolo: "I see, what was that dark aura I sense ealier, as soon as it end the first person to arrive was Avok.. desperate to train himself.. and his power.." he stood there while looking at goten and trunks training outside, before they decided to take a break. "Alright you two thats enough for today."

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-14 20:17:42 +0000 UTC]

(Anger issues are something that all DB fighers have it seems xD
and yes! Piccolo is amazing. Love that guy!)

Vaal: She didn't answer him for a moment. Woman felt responsible for Black coming here, like if it was her fault. She should've checked her machine better before turning it on. "It was the enemy from my times. Somehow he found me here." she said, still haing eyes on young men. Trunks looked exactly the same like one she met and that other one...could he be... that little boy, always running around with Trunks? Goku's younger son...Goten? "It's still not Avok's fight." she added with serious tone. "It's enough that Trunks asked Vegeta and Goku to come with us."

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-14 20:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Piccolo: Ive never sensed someone so powerful." -hears the door open.- hmm


Avok: -avok would walk out in his new uniform and a new look in his eyes.- "Im ready..."

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-15 08:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Vaal: "And you won't, he's not gonna come back here anymore." he replied and looked at Avok. Her body quickly tensed and relaxed tail was moving nervously from side to side. All she needed now was to another ass to watch over during the fight. "Gotta have a deathwish to be this stuborn..." she muttered to herself and clacked her tongue in disablief.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-15 15:11:29 +0000 UTC]

(still thinking about the picolo avok fusion)

Avok: "..." he looked at her as he would say "hmm I see you stayed, lets get going.."

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-15 15:19:22 +0000 UTC]

(Any idea how would it look like? )

Vaal: She snorted and crossed arms on chest. "I didn't. Your pal here decided that knocing me out is the best option." she huffed annoyed and her tail smacked loudly in the air. "Let's get something clear..." her eyes pierced Avok's, they had that warning shine in them. "...if you get killed, I ain't gonna do anything to fix that, you got it?"

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-15 16:02:24 +0000 UTC]

(I might have an idea lol if we can't kill him we can at least seal him o.o what you think?)

Avok: he looked down at her, he was a very tall man similar to the height of super buu. "My life should be the least of your worries..." 

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-15 16:16:16 +0000 UTC]

(Seal him like they did with Buu? Doesn't sound bad. And, about Avok's height... if Piccolo's 7'5" and Super Buu was even taller then how giant Avok even is?  o_o )

Vaal: Her eyes saddened for a moment but she quickly turned back on him and flied off without a word, wanting to get to her machine as soon as possible. She already felt like she's responsible for all her people dying on her eyes. She didn't need to add anyone else to that. She wouldn't be abe to live with that.
Woman accelerated and in few seconds landed between two tyall hills. She took a device out of her pocket and turned off the cloaking field. Her machine appeared on a grass, between the trees and it's door slide opned.
Vehicle was rather big. At least 15 people could fit in and there would be still some room left. Vaal looked at silver/white walls and at windows, showing the inside of the cockpit. That machine along with all that was in it was the last remaning of Deytanians' civilization.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-15 16:45:52 +0000 UTC]

(Well his alien race was inspired by angels, so he can be either buus height or in between buu and piccolo O.O so hes always been tall lol)

Avok: -his red aura would burst as he would fly along with her, landing between the two hills, as he went toward the ship with her- "I have never seen, this type of time machine before.. hmm it is exquisite.."

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-15 17:01:45 +0000 UTC]

(Damn...he's freaking huge then O_o Vaal's tall herself but not this tall! He's a giant! )

Vaal: She was silent for a moment, still mad at the other. He just kept on insulting her, didn't he. "It's a last remaning from my people." she finally spoke up and placed bionic hand on a cold steel of machine's wall. "I've built it with me..." she paused for a moment, this was still an open wound, still bleeding and refusing to scar. "...my mom. No wonders you didn't see anything like this, your tech is so primitive after all." she quickly added and quickly got on board so he wouldn't see pain that crossed her face.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-15 17:06:57 +0000 UTC]

(yus :3 hes a tall man, possibly about an or two inches taller than piccolo)

Avok: he continued into the ship and as he looked around in awe. as he said, "Well, I do not have a time machine but my ship is not primitive, earths technology is." he would go and sit down and wait till she launched the ship towards the future.-

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-15 17:16:14 +0000 UTC]

(Holy manolly, that is tall! )

Vaal: She led him to the cockpit, keeping other parts of ship closed right now. Cockpit itself had two lines of seats, three seats in both lines. As she sat on pilot's seat, main computer turned on and gladd in front of her served as a screen, filled with glowing, purple data. Door shut close and she entered the data and day they were about to go to. also, she had to enter right coordinates to end up in a right future. "Seatbelts." she said without looking at the guy and did it herself too.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-15 18:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Avok: he clips his belt on and says "ready.." he waiting as he closed his eyes this being the first time he had ever time traveled.-

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-15 19:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Vaal: She looked at him for a moment and clenched her fist. No. She takes no responsibility for him. Almost violantly she pushed few buttons and pulled the lever. Ship engaged, left the ground and floated to the sky. Then she pulled the steering wheel to herself, making them move forawd. Fast. Jumping into wormhole.
Even if ship moved smoothly, human body wasn't used to such trips. One could feel nauseous, like if his insides were beig ripped apart, decyaying, only to get back together in some other place.
Vaal wrote something on the keyboard in front of her with fre hands and ship accelerated even more.
Then they jumped out on the other side. To the ruined world without a sun and with heavy, black clouds hanging over it.
"We're here. Sorry, but there won't be any welcoming committee." she said with grim voice and landed gently in something thatused to be an underground parking lot. Woman quickly checked few more data on her screen. "They didn't arrive yet. Bulma's time machine travels way too slow." she sighed and unclipped her belt.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-16 02:37:10 +0000 UTC]

Avok: "For someone who hates my guts, you sure worry about me to much." -he says after feeling naises and arriving into the future.- -Avok would walk towards the ship door waiting till the opened. "ugh my insides feel weird..."

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-16 08:40:30 +0000 UTC]

Vaal: She blinked confused and looked after him with her usual, childish and surprised expression. "Worry? When did I worry?" and then scowl came on her face as she shook her head quickly. "No no no, no throwing up in here! Do it outside!" she quickly opened the door for him and got up from chair, walking the exit as well.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-16 18:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Avok: "Your eyes says it all Vaal" -he walked out side and his eyes widen with the destruction of this world in the future.- "w-what... has happened..."

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-16 18:54:29 +0000 UTC]

Vaal: "You talk like if you know me." she said and stood in a doorway, looking at the ruined world. Her face saddened for a short moment as she looked around yet again. There was no way she'd stay here once Black's dead. "Black happened." she answered and hopped out of the ship. "His goal is to destroy all the human race. Not just here. He means all humanoid and human-like races." she looked at Avok. "You still say I should get over it and move on?" Vaal frowned, remaining him what he told her the other day.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-16 23:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Avok: "You know that is not what I meant.. So try not to play with my words.." he got angry and tried to calm down.- "I will draw black here... " -he placed his arms next to him.-

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-17 08:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Vaal: "Nah, it's just that now you know what I'm fighting for." she said calmly and her eyes shot open at the gesture he was making. She quickly smacked his arms down. "No! Bad Avok, we're waiting for others. Your few hours in weird chamber didn't do miricles, it's Black we'r talking about." her face suddenly softened as she turned around to see Trunk's machine time appearing up in the sky and slowly lowering to land few fet away from them. It's cockpit was packed with three Saiyans and they all jumped outonce it opened.
"Vaal-san! Hope you're not waiting too long!" it was Trunks, but he stopped talking as saw Avok.
"Who the hell is that?" Vegeta frowned more that usually and scoffed. "It doesn't matter, he better not get in between me and Black."
"Eh? But I thought it's my turn now?" Goku blinked, competely ignoring Avok at first. "Or maybe yours?"
"Of course it's mine! You already got your ass kicked by him!" Vegeta crossed arms on chest.
"Yeah, he got me good!" Goku laughed and flied up to Avok, then reached out his hand. "S'up! I'm Son Goku! You gonna help us out?"

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-17 09:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Avok: -he put a smile on his face, to see that they were at least alive else were, he then looks at vegeta and says "Prince" he was always very formal with vegeta, his people knew of the planet vegeta, though not in good terms he had learned to respect, saiyan like both goku and vegeta. "I am Avok" 

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-17 10:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Vaal: Vegeta ignored his greeting, getting more and more impatient and just looked elsewhere, taking in the sight of destroyed city. Where the hell was Black?
"Wait, so you know Vegeta?" Goku blinked surprised and smiled widely. "Grumpy Prince is popular, isn't he?"
"Enough with the chitchat!" Vegeta cut their conversation and frowned as he reached hand out in the air, to summon Black. But his hand got grabbed and pulled down. Vegeta twitched when he realized it was Vaal. "What are you doing?!"
"Not here. Can't risk two machines getting destroyed. How you're gonna get back home if it happens?" she explained plainly and let go of his hand.
"Let's take it to the city center. There's no one hiding there, so we don't have to hold back." said Trunks and he flied to that direction, to show them the place.
Goku, Vegeta and Vaal followed him to the spot.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-17 20:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Avok: "Lets just say we all have already met." -he would follow them to the city hoping that they could actually defeat this guy.

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-17 21:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Vaal: As they were on way, Goku flied up next to Avok and looked at him closely. Then he spoke up. "I'm really surprised that Vaal tagged you along. She was even against me and Vegeta coming in here." he blinked, hoping that Avok will tell him more about it. City center was now only seconds away and the rest three already landed on the destroyed square.
Vegeta was again raised his hand up but Vaal was first to shoot blazing beam of light high up in the air.
"Why did you do that?!" Prince clenched his fist and growled irritated.
"Elder's right." woman smiled happily.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-17 21:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Avok: "Lets say Piccolo and I had to slap some sense into her." -he would continue to fly and land to where black would end up being summoned. he would look at her and reply, " Elders right? is that right? heh" he stood there waiting for black to show up.

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-17 21:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Vall: Goku looked confused by Avok's words but didn't get the chance to ask about. He also landed on the ground and looked around, trying to sense Black.
"Well, I am older than Vegeta, so it makes me older than Trunks and goku as well." Vaal blinked, not getting what Avok just said.
"Like I even care that you're my sister, no one can confirm that." Vegeta snorted and looked up in the ky. "He's here."
He was right. Thunders and lightnings tore dark sky apart and Black appeared between the clouds, lowering himself down to the fighters with same, usual cocky smirk sticked to his face.
"Black!" Trunks reached to his sword but was stopped by his father.
"You'll just watch."

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-18 04:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Avok: he would grin his teeth in angry just seeing his stupid cocky smile. He looked like he wanted to do something but he knew it would be reckless.

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-18 15:06:51 +0000 UTC]

(...I just started 3 paged comic including Vaal's new transformation I was about to call Super Saiyan White but... just found out that Toriyama actually plans to make it true O.O That either Black or goku are going to reach this level during fight. I got sketches of all 3 pages and not really sure what to do with it now. )

Vaal: Woman was about to attack Black herself but before she could do it, Vegeta turned into Super Saiyan Blue and flied up to Black, attacking him immidiately.
"Vegeta~" Vaal was ready to hep him out but Goku placed hand on her shoulder, stopping her in her place. "What?"
"It's his turn you know, can't ruin his fun." he smiled.
"Turn...fun?!" woman frowned and growled. "What are you guys, kids?!"
As she was ready to argue more, Vegeta was solemnly losing the battle. He hit the ground and watched Black in horror.
"You're got that something, don't you. I'll show you something cool as your reward." Black grinned and let out a loud yell as he started transforming, watched by shocked eyes of his enemies.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-18 16:51:52 +0000 UTC]

(or you can call it super saiyan snow, Avok has a white haired form still no name xD just give it your own thing.)

Avok: -his eyes would widen as all he could do was watch black transform with shocked eyes.- .... what is this monsterous power...

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-18 17:05:21 +0000 UTC]

(Yeah, but Avok's not a Saiyan, so his form's a completely different thing, right? Was actually thinking about calling it Pure at first but then again, if Japanese would pronounce it the way they do, it'd sound like Purée. Super Saiyan Purée *facepalm*
Guess I'll go with Silver. Or will stick to the White and make up a whole new story for how she even reached it. Anyway, thanks for the advice!)

VaaL: Finally, his aura bursted, covering him all for a moment. Then it went down a bit to show his new form. Pink hair, dark pink and black aura, so powerful, so terrifying.
"How do you find this clor, beautiful isn't it?" he started talking, obviously proud of his new look. Narcissistic. Egocentric. "If I was to call it they way you do...how about Rosé? Yes, Super Saiyan Rosé." smiirk widened on his face.
Vegeta frowned deeply and got up yet again to keep fighting with him. Before he could clash with Black again, he was pushed away by Vaal.
"What the hell...how dare you...?!" he started but stopped as he saw her holding Black's wrist up, around his jamd he focused his Ki, making a blade from it. Blade that was supposed to pierce Vegeta.
"Isn't pink a girly color?" she blinked as Black snapped his wrist free and moved few feet away.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-19 07:41:38 +0000 UTC]

(True he is not a saiyan, he is a Bacharrian. I mean black turned into a super saiyan pink which is called rose.  Up to you lol)

Avok: -he would be in shock his power was terrifying but avok knew what was at stake.- "This isn't a game... " -his red aura would burst from his body, his hair would begin to flow up into the air as the area he was would softly quake as his hair began to spike up slowly struggling with calming himself down... his aura would then start to fade into a dark blue color, his hair fading from black and white, and then back, his pupils becoming a light people as placed his hands on to the side as his aura would burst, and slowly dim down showing his white haired form. (which still has no name DX) -he stood there for a couple seconds and as he said, "Something I've always hated.. The world is in danger and you two always seem to think of it as a time to play around.. " he said to Vegeta and Goku. he would then turn his eyes towards black.- 

(what if black was the one who killed his goku and vegeta? or should it be someone else?)

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-09-21 11:35:08 +0000 UTC]

(Rose is color as well, it's not meant as a flower. Calling it Super Saiyan Pink would be kinda lame so, they just called it Rose xDD
But I getcha. Will think about it, for now, just gonna keep doing my thing with that x3
And og, if Black was to kill Goku and Vegeta in inAvok's world, he'd destroy whole planet as well, his mission is to eliminate all the human beings, not just Saiyans.
But I guess, since it's your story you could make that happen, Black could go the other route there. So really, up to you~ )

Vaal: For a moment, she turned around to look at Avok and to see reactions on other Saiyans' faces. This short moment of distration was enough for Black to catch her off guard, throw multiple punches all over her body, making her look like a rug doll, then he just kicked Vaal down into the ground. Dirty move,. Attacking one like that.
Vegeta grit his teeth at the sight, it made him forget Avok's words he said just now. Goku ran to the whole Vaal landed in and helped her out of there. Woman thanked him and looked at Avok, as he was ready to go, giving him a silent sign it was his turn. She needed a moment to get her Ki all together.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-29 17:16:38 +0000 UTC]

(Could of just been when they went to the future to stop black in his time line and they came back but they were dead. I wouldnt know XD anyways.)

Avok: he smiled towards black, hoping this was at least enough as his aura began to fade into a emerald color, just as his eyes would become a dark green color, followed by his hair moving violently, as it began to slowly shrink into as it began to spike up (Idk if the hair should spike kinda like gohans style or vegettos hair style what do you think?) as it began began to glow his whole body covered by white light as it slowly began to fade away revealing a younger looking shorter version of Avok, with short spiked emerald hair, green light markings on his skin as he looked towards black.- "Sadly, I don't have a name for any of my forms.. "

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R-Blackout In reply to NemeHex [2016-10-15 16:07:50 +0000 UTC]

(Whaaa, sounds kinda complicated xD )

Vaal: As she stood on her own feet again and refused to take a senzu bean, Vaal glared up at Black. She was more than sure that Avok won't be able to finish this guy off all by himself but she hoped he'll distract him enough so she could charge her batteries and attack the guy when he won't see it coming.
Black turned around to look down on the green haired one. He snorted and smirked slyly, feeling his energy.

"I don't really care how you call them. After all, you're just a worthless human. So are your 'forms'. Pathetic attempts to become something better. But a human can't become better."

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-10-15 17:09:10 +0000 UTC]

(Damn, where the hell have you been? XD lol also I made some Ideas but meh they don't look good )

Avok: "This is coming from someone who had to steal.. someone elses body.. your the only weak one I see here.." -he flipped him off- "so come at me.. pinky.." -avok got ready he knew he couldn't beat black, for he did know the extent of his current power.

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NemeHex In reply to R-Blackout [2016-09-21 11:47:15 +0000 UTC]

(Could of just been when they went to the future to stop black in his time line and they came back but they were dead. I wouldnt know XD anyways.)

Avok: he smiled towards black, hoping this was at least enough as his aura began to fade into a emerald color, just as his eyes would become a dark green color, followed by his hair moving violently, as it began to slowly shrink into as it began to spike up (Idk if the hair should spike kinda like gohans style or vegettos hair style what do you think?) as it began began to glow his whole body covered by white light as it slowly began to fade away revealing a younger looking shorter version of Avok, with short spiked emerald hair, green light markings on his skin as he looked towards black.- "Sadly, I don't have a name for any of my forms.. "

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Herr-Totenkopf In reply to ??? [2016-08-15 12:23:18 +0000 UTC]

OH YES ! Totally worth of waiting ! Just amazing !

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R-Blackout In reply to Herr-Totenkopf [2016-08-15 14:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, glad you like!

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Herr-Totenkopf In reply to R-Blackout [2016-08-15 14:53:04 +0000 UTC]

You are absolutely welcome ! She sure look one tough woman XD.

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R-Blackout In reply to Herr-Totenkopf [2016-08-15 15:22:04 +0000 UTC]

And she sure is tough x3

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Herr-Totenkopf In reply to R-Blackout [2016-08-15 15:45:03 +0000 UTC]

And the desing...you just nailed it !

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Wolf-Fang4 In reply to ??? [2016-08-15 00:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Love this sayan. Hot to the core.

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R-Blackout In reply to Wolf-Fang4 [2016-08-15 09:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm really glad you do!

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The-Crimson-X In reply to ??? [2016-08-14 20:21:14 +0000 UTC]

I NEED ONE OF THESE! XD

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R-Blackout In reply to The-Crimson-X [2016-08-14 20:23:10 +0000 UTC]

You need one of Vaal's forms? xD

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The-Crimson-X In reply to R-Blackout [2016-08-14 20:32:39 +0000 UTC]

I need this layout for my own Sayain gal XD

And her and Val exchanging blows XD

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R-Blackout In reply to The-Crimson-X [2016-08-14 21:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Then take it yo xD
You got appearance for her yet?

Pffft, hold your horses, first Vaal will kick her ass over and over xDD

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The-Crimson-X In reply to R-Blackout [2016-08-14 21:20:19 +0000 UTC]

I think I do, but no one to do the design yet

I meant punches ya perv

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