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raining-pandas — Tell Me I'm Wrong, Darling 4
Published: 2008-07-13 21:14:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 3830; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 7
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Description Manga/Anime used: Shugo Chara
Pairing: Amuto
Rating: T
Note: This is the last chapter~!


~~~~~~Amu's POV~~~~~~

"Ikuto!!!!" I yelled. He stopped and turned when he heard my voice. His face looked frightened, like he wanted to run away but his body wouldn't move. 'Oh, Ikuto, I'm so sorry for doing this to you.' I thought as I ran towards him.

Finally reaching him, I flung my arms around him in a tight hug.

"Ikuto, I have to tell you something!" My eyes sparkled as they looked into his mesmorizing blue ones. Some of the fear had left them, but it had only been replaced with a worried curiosity. I took a deep breath. After all, I wasn't sure if his reaction was going to be the one I wanted. "Ikuto, I-"

I was cut off by a harsh tug on my arm and a pair of lips crashing against mine. But they didn't belong to Ikuto.

Once they'd stopped kissing me, I glared angrily at who it was. Just as I'd expected, it was Tadase-kun. He wrapped his arms around me, stopping me from getting away.

"Tadase-kun, let-" Again I was cut off by a hand covering my mouth.

"She wanted to tell you that she's my girlfriend now, you thieving cat! So leave her alone and don't you dare ever talk to her again!!!" He said and turned my head to forcfully kiss me again.

".........Alright......." Ikuto whispered, and slowly walked away.

I wanted to scream, but I couldn't. I wanted to escape Tadase's grasp, but I couldn't. I wanted to fight back, but that last word had drained everything from me, and I couldn't.

"Never go near that cat again." Tadase whispered darkly into my ear before letting go of me and walking towards the rest of the stunned guardian's. "Don't worry about her, she'll be fine. Let's go." They all walked away, and my legs collapsed.

I layed there on the ground letting myself cry. 'What had happened?' I thought. 'Why? Why had Tadase done that?' I thought back to his normal angel like expression and then his bitter kiss and his harsh voice in my ear. It just didn't fit. 'And now because of him...I'll never be able to tell Ikuto that I'm sorry and how much I love him.' I continued to let myself cry on the abandoned street for a few more minutes and then picked myself up and walked vacantly back home.

~~~~~~~Tadase's POV~~~~~~~~

Even I had surprised myself by how harsh I'd acted, but I didn't regret it. Now that I finally had her, I wasn't about to let Ikuto steal my Amu. I'd seen her walking up to Ikuto that day in the park and decided to do some spying. I followed her as she arrived at his apartment and hid around the corner listening.

I was about to leave after she had walked away until I heard Ikuto whisper something. I inched closer to the door and heard him say, 'I love you, Amu.' Inside, I burned with rage.

'How dare he think that way about my Amu?!' But since she was sure to be angry at him and she had me, I hadn't been too worried. I decided to let it go for then and left.

But then today, she'd looked upset so I decided, just to be safe, I'd tell her not to get involved with that cat. When she started defending him, I knew it definitly wasn't looking good.

Then I saw something click in her eyes and then he showed up, making the situation even worse.

I was surprised when she suddenly hugged him in front of me. All of a sudden, I knew what that click had meant and I rushed in to prevent her from choosing him over me. It was completely out of my character but I wasn't going to lose her like that. I'd succeeded and now she was mine.

~~~~~~~~~~~One week later. Amu's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~

Another guardian's meeting, but I'd rather be anywhere but here right now. In the week that had passed by, I'd stayed out late every night searching for Ikuto. I'd never been able to find him and I was starting to lose hope, not only in the search, but in everything. My parents had scolded me for being out so late every night, but even when they prevented me from searching, there was no way I could fall asleep and I just stayed up all night looking out at the balcony praying that he would come...He never did.

While I was stuck at school or at home, I wandered around with empty eyes, not really paying attention to anything around me. The only thing that mattered now was that I loved Ikuto and I was never going to see him again. I hadn't talked to Tadase, or any of the other guardian's since then and I barely talked to my parents or Ami.

Suddenly, I remembered who was to blame for all this and for the first time in a while, I spoke.

"Tadase-kun..."

"Hn? Hinamori-san? Did you say something?"

"Tadase-kun........TADASE-KUN!!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!!!! IF YOU HADN'T BEEN SO SELFISH!!!!! If....if....." My voice quieted to a whisper as I felt the knot in my throat tightening. "I'm sorry, Tadase-kun, I can't date you anymore. I.....I LOVE IKUTO!!!!" I shouted and ran out of the Royal Garden, tears streaming down my cheeks. I didn't pay attention to where I was running, I just ran.

I lifted up my arm to my eyes to try and wipe away the tears. Somehow this felt somewhat familiar, but I ignored the feeling and kept running. 'If I had a hole to crawl into...' I thought. Right as I finished thinking that, I felt the ground disappear beneath me and I fell into a deep hole.

"IT WAS A FIGURE OF SPEECH!!!!" I yelled. But something was wrong. Hitting the ground didn't hurt as much as it was supposed to. What the? What kind of ground is this?

"If you don't mind, I'd appreciate it if I could breathe, Amu."

Oh great, now the ground's talking to me! I must have hit my head or something.

"Did you hear me, Amu, I said get off!"

Heh, that's funny. The ground sort of sounds like-.......oh. Oh! "Ikuto! W-what are you doing here?"

"Um, more like, why did you randomly fall on top of me yelling really loudly in my ear? And, plus, I thought you didn't want to see me anymore."

"Um, well I was just, um..."

"And your eyes are all red. Where you crying or something?" His face turned from saddness to concern. Well at least that's a start. Oh yeah! I almost forgot!

I wrapped my arms around him in a big hug and I wasn't about to let go. "Ikuto, I'm so sorry!" I whispered in his ear.

"...Hey...Amu...what're you..."

I kept whispering that I was sorry. I was so relieved to have finally found him that my tears started all over again. His arms hesitently wrapped around me, trying to comfort me.

"Ikuto, I have to tell you something." I said once I'd calmed down a little.

"What? You're dating Tadase and some other guy now?" He asked jokingly.

I pulled away to look at him. "NO! The last time, with Tadase-kun...that wasn't what I'd wanted to say! I'm not dating Tadase-kun anymore. I broke up with him because........because I wanted to say that I love you!!"

His eyes widened and he just layed there stunned. "A-Amu......you......you really love me?" he whispered.

I nodded. "I mean, that is, if you're ok with it. Not that I'm asking you to be. I mean, I know I don't really deserve it after what I did to you! I made you so upset. I-"

I was cut off again by a pair of lips. But this time it was much better because they were the lips of the one I love. I kissed him back and he made it deeper, more passionate. So this is what it felt like to be kissed...properly kissed I should say. It felt good.

We eventually hesitantly broke the kiss. "I love you too, Amu," he said. Hearing those words made face explode into the biggest, happiest smile I've ever had. "And, Amu?"

"Yeah?"

"You really are suffocating me..."

"Ah! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!" I leaped off of him only to be pulled back.

"I didn't say stop!" he said smirking.

I blushed. "B-baka~!"


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Tell Me I'm Wrong, Darling END
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Comments: 120

Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to ??? [2008-11-21 05:49:46 +0000 UTC]

O..But what happen in the end of the anime that when Light was about to died he saw L.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-21 20:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Well, in the anime, L didn't use the Death Note so I guess he was able to become a ghost :\

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-23 00:23:25 +0000 UTC]

So...who esle do you like in death note other than L.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-23 03:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmmmm.......well, L pwns all, but I'd have to say Ryuk was pretty awesome too :'D His addiction to apples constantly made me lol

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-28 12:20:11 +0000 UTC]

I like Matt but they made him died too soon in the manga and anime so as soon as L and Matt dieds I stopped watching and reading Death Note.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-28 16:52:45 +0000 UTC]

I don't really get why everyone likes Matt so much. He was only in, like, 10 pannels so it's kind of hard to get to know the guy and start fangirling over him. Not to mention he only got about a minute of screentime so.....I just never really got it :\
As soon as L died I started losing interest xD;; I missed a bunch of episodes because of that so I was kind of confused at the end. I really want to go back and watch them but I don't know which ones I missed and which ones I didn't =v=;;

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-29 14:04:20 +0000 UTC]

The reason girls like him is because He is cute and maybe they like his googles but I think girls today might be intersted into computers wizurds or something or game freaks. Oh in the end They firgured out that Lihgt was Kira and Matusa I think shoot him and Ryuk as promised that he would wrote Light's name in his death Note and killed him and Light didn't want to died because after death Humans go to this one place Nothingness and after they died they obivously can't come back.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-29 17:24:28 +0000 UTC]

I don't think Matt's that cute! Honestly, when I saw him in the anime I thought he was a cocky bastard! xDDD
I understood the last episode (I actually watched that one! xD *gives self gold star*). I've heard some things about Matt tailing Misa?...Yeah, I didn't see that so I don't know what that's about. I also didn't see the episode where Mello and Takada died until a couple weeks ago because I asked someone what episode Matt was in since I hadn't seen that one xD; So when I saw the last episode I was like, "What happened to that bit-, I mean, Takada?" And some people are saying that Misa died but I saw her on the train in the last episode so I was like "WAIT WHAT?! @__________@"

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-29 23:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Don't forget I aslo saw Misa when she was walk to the top of this building or something but what will happen o Misa after Light dieds?

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-30 01:31:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm guessing she'd kill herself D: She's super crazy over Light and all, I don't think she'd want to go on living...

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-01 08:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Suicude is horribul...

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-12-01 23:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Tis indeed D: But, honestly I can see Misa doing that. She did say she'd die for him after all.

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-04 07:57:06 +0000 UTC]

I find her as a slut so she will manage

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-12-04 20:47:17 +0000 UTC]

O: MISA JUST GOT OWNED xDDDDDD

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-05 11:56:48 +0000 UTC]

It's true isn't it.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-12-05 14:10:05 +0000 UTC]

I suppose :'D I love the episode where she's drunk and all the police guys are like "@x@"

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-05 14:25:06 +0000 UTC]

What number episode was that? I what to see it.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-12-06 00:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Uh............I actually don't remember :'D I think it was the one where they faked Matsuda's death but I'm not sure which number that is...

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-06 00:52:12 +0000 UTC]

oh...So did you liked the part where light died

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-12-06 20:54:15 +0000 UTC]

O: That part was EPIC!!!!!!! It probably would've been even more so if I hadn't spoiled the ending for myslef on wikipedia =v=;;

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-07 04:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Ether way it was obivious he had to die sooner or later..by Ryuk's hand

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-12-07 04:48:55 +0000 UTC]

It was obvious but you just started getting so caught up in who was killing who and how and why and this person knows who that person is but that person doesn't know who this person is that it almost came as a surprise when it suddenly happened like that

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-08 11:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Sorry. T_T

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-12-08 20:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Huh? No, I was just giving an example xD; "You" was referring to the watcher

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-12-10 09:49:01 +0000 UTC]

OH...

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chossette40 In reply to ??? [2008-09-21 22:01:40 +0000 UTC]

*fangirls*
Gotta love it! now, I'm gonna imagine the rest to when Amu is gonna be grown up to loooove ikuto properly XD

great fic!
I loved it!

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chossette40 [2008-09-21 22:00:53 +0000 UTC]

*fangirls*
Gotta love it! now, I'm gonna imagine the rest to when Amu is gonna be grown up to loooove ikuto properly XD

great fic!
I loved it!

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japanesebobcat In reply to ??? [2008-09-14 07:34:20 +0000 UTC]

I really really really LOVED this. on youtube I'm always saying I don't take sides in pairing debates, but I think I'm now a full amuto fan. It's wierd because I've never taken sides before.

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bumbee565 In reply to ??? [2008-09-07 00:19:19 +0000 UTC]

what a great story! Yay, Amuto!

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neenee-jb In reply to ??? [2008-07-30 00:30:02 +0000 UTC]

reads author's comments

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nevercallmeichigo In reply to ??? [2008-07-29 18:18:56 +0000 UTC]

lol, cried slightly at the fic, laughed my head off at the summary. XD

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cry-fighter In reply to ??? [2008-07-29 18:10:56 +0000 UTC]

I mean 5th chapter!! sorry!!

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raining-pandas In reply to cry-fighter [2008-07-29 23:51:50 +0000 UTC]

sadly no but there will eventually be a sequel once I stop procrastinating

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cry-fighter In reply to ??? [2008-07-29 18:10:14 +0000 UTC]

I just love it !! -^.^-
is there coming a third chapter??

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Chappi15 In reply to ??? [2008-07-16 20:58:06 +0000 UTC]

I just found this chapter randomly, and even though I didn't read the other chapters, the last chapter was awsome! Very romantic! I love the Ikuto and Amu couple a lot! Your very good with words! Keep up the good work!
Quick question. I just started reading Shugo chara fic.'s, but what does "Amuto" mean? I figure it means Amu/Ikuto but why is it "Amu" with "to" at the end...? Should it be "AmuIku?" *shrugs shoulders*
Well great story again!

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raining-pandas In reply to Chappi15 [2008-07-17 00:12:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3
yea it means AmuXIkuto. I'm not really sure why it's not AmuIku either but I suppose you could say it that way too xD I think Amuto is just easier to say but...*shrugs* idk

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Chappi15 In reply to raining-pandas [2008-07-17 22:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, I guess I can see where it comes from and easy to say (I agree). Thanks for telling me!

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TheChocolateDonut In reply to ??? [2008-07-16 17:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Ikuto: What's that, Amu? You say you finally want to make babies with me? Well why didn't you say so earlier?! *picks up Amu and takes her off toward the bedroom*

NAUGHTY NAUGHTY! ;D

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raining-pandas In reply to TheChocolateDonut [2008-07-16 19:39:19 +0000 UTC]

fufufufufu >w< yes. but isn't that why we all love that smexy bishie? ;3

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geofan In reply to ??? [2008-07-16 03:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Its very good I may not be a big love story fan but I realy like this

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raining-pandas In reply to geofan [2008-07-16 16:55:22 +0000 UTC]

thankies ^^ and also thank you for the comment on 'Love?' :3

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geofan In reply to raining-pandas [2008-07-16 23:31:45 +0000 UTC]

your welcome for both ^_^

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cutecaygirlz In reply to ??? [2008-07-14 17:27:18 +0000 UTC]

that was great i almost cryed >.<

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pirin101 In reply to ??? [2008-07-14 12:22:46 +0000 UTC]

This story was soooo cute
Too bad it won't happen in the anime

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raining-pandas In reply to pirin101 [2008-07-14 17:02:05 +0000 UTC]

don't give up hope~! there's still a possibility of amuto in the end~ <3

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FallenMidnightStars In reply to ??? [2008-07-14 12:20:49 +0000 UTC]

*grin* AMUxIKUTO! finally!!!!! *grin* *grin wider* *griiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin* GOOD JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB!! *kicks tadase in the head*

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raining-pandas In reply to FallenMidnightStars [2008-07-14 17:02:48 +0000 UTC]

thank youuuuuu fallen-chan~! <3 *huggles*
LOL *kicks Tadase where it hurts*

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FallenMidnightStars In reply to raining-pandas [2008-07-15 01:03:46 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHAH!! kick him in the thing!! lol!!! LOL!!! *can't stop laughing* your welcome pandaaaaaaaaa-chi!!

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raining-pandas In reply to FallenMidnightStars [2008-07-15 01:07:18 +0000 UTC]

lolz~ that is if he even has one o.o;; *is skeptical to Tadase's gender* xDDDD I mean have you /seen/ his character transform?!

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FallenMidnightStars In reply to raining-pandas [2008-07-15 01:25:59 +0000 UTC]

lol!!! he looked like a girl, I know!

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