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Rat-Man1 β€” More back story for Eclipse

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Rat-Man1 In reply to ??? [2017-05-08 03:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Yup you got it basicly.Β 




Yes it is every sad and I know,Β I would help her light side to.

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Jolt-The-Thunder In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 04:06:45 +0000 UTC]

But would her light side come back if she kill that another killer?

If she just only kill to get some XP and LvL up so she can win that another killer and it's just her dark side who want to revenge for killing her family, who know? πŸ€”

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Jolt-The-Thunder [2017-05-08 04:10:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes it would or would it. ^^



That is a good point little bro.

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Jolt-The-Thunder In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 04:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Again another question. ^^



I love this story because it so many questions big bro.

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Jolt-The-Thunder [2017-05-08 04:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is. ^^





I am happy you like it little bro.

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Jolt-The-Thunder In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 04:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Hehe ^^

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Jolt-The-Thunder [2017-05-08 04:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Hehe ^w^

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Starry-the-Jolteon In reply to ??? [2017-05-08 01:02:11 +0000 UTC]

So, she watched her family die and that made her a killer?

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Starry-the-Jolteon [2017-05-08 01:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Yes and it is a thing to do with her mind, seeing that happen and than being alone for a long time.Β 

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Jolt-The-Thunder In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 04:36:16 +0000 UTC]

I feel her when she is alone.

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Jolt-The-Thunder [2017-05-08 04:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Me to, me to little bro.

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Starry-the-Jolteon In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 01:08:12 +0000 UTC]

I guess I see how that can make someone insane

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Starry-the-Jolteon [2017-05-08 01:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Yes it can and at her age too.

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Starry-the-Jolteon In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 01:10:53 +0000 UTC]

O really?

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Starry-the-Jolteon [2017-05-08 01:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she is and was very young. Β 

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Starry-the-Jolteon In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 01:15:25 +0000 UTC]

How young?

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Starry-the-Jolteon [2017-05-08 01:19:58 +0000 UTC]

She was 2.

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Starry-the-Jolteon In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 01:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Human years?

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Starry-the-Jolteon [2017-05-08 01:26:12 +0000 UTC]

In DogΒ years

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Starry-the-Jolteon In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 01:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay

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Rat-Man1 In reply to Starry-the-Jolteon [2017-05-08 01:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Ok.

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BronyPony88 In reply to ??? [2017-05-08 01:00:45 +0000 UTC]

its a good back story but the grammar, story line, plot, etc needs a lot of work

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Rat-Man1 In reply to BronyPony88 [2017-05-08 01:07:25 +0000 UTC]

I am working on it.

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BronyPony88 In reply to Rat-Man1 [2017-05-08 02:12:33 +0000 UTC]

????????????

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Rat-Man1 In reply to BronyPony88 [2017-05-08 02:16:30 +0000 UTC]

What?

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