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Description I did another 'cry' stamp. It was so sad !! All she wanted to do was protect her clan...

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Small paws skittered nearby. The Shadowclan cats pressed themselver to the ground.

"This way!" The tortoiseshell began to stalk, keeping low.

Snowfur growled, "If they think they're going to hunt on Thunderclan terrytory, they've got another thing coming." She leapt out from the bush and skidded in front of the Shadowclan warriors, her back arched and her claws unsheathed. "Stop right there!"

The Shadowclan cats flinched away, tails bristling.

Bluefur pelted after her sister. "Mangy crow-food eaters!" She bared her teeth, a growl rumbling in her throat.

The tortoiseshell blinked. "Is that it? Two cats? Not much of a patrol."

"Enough to deal with you!" Bluefur spat.

The black tom straightened, eyes gleaming. "You think so?"

The tabby snarled, "If you're all Thunderclan can come up with, I think we'll catch this squirrel and then go home."

"Oh no, you don't!" Snowfur launched herself at the tabby, knocking him sideways with a crashing blow from her forepaw.

The tortoieshell's eyes widened with shock. Even Bluefur was startled. "Snowfur..." she began.

"I've been stuck in camp for too long to miss the chance for a fight," Snowfur spat.

There was no way Bluefur was going to let her sister battle these trespassers alone. Springing forward, she lashed out with unsheathed claws at the black tom, slitting his nose. He pelted, yowling, into the bushes.

The tabby tom scrambled to his paws. "Let's get out of here!" he yowled.

Snowfur hurtled afther the fleeing Shadowclan warriors, screeching like a whole battle patrol. Bluefur was on her tail. They would teach those crow-food munchers a lesson they wouldn't forget!

The forest brightened ahead where the trees opened onto the Thunderpath. The Shadowclan cats pelted out into the sunshine, and Snowfur hared after them. Bluefur raced from the trees, blinking against the sudden brightness.

The Shadowclan warriors were already half way across the Thunderpath.

"You don't escape that easily!" Snowfur screeched furiously as they skidded to the other side and disappeared into the pines. Pelt bristling, eyes wide, Snowfur streaked after them, over the oily Thunderpath.

Bluefur froze.

A monster was roaring straight at Snowfur.

Without slowing down, it slammed into her body.

Bluefur heard the dull thump, then the howl of the monster as it thundered away, leaving Snowfur's body lying like a wet leaf at the edge of the Thunderpath.

"No!"

This was the worst part ;(

She slid into the nursery. "Whitekit."

"You're back!" Whitekit looked delighted. He glanced behind Bluefur. "Is Snowfur with you?"

Bluefur took a deep breath and tensed to stop her paws from shaking. "Come outside little one," she mewed.

"Has Snowfur got a present for me?" Whitekit chirped.

Tigerkit stopped chasing Brindlekit's tail. "Can I come, too?"

"Just Whitekit." Bluefur told him, thanking Starclan that he listened for once.

Whitekit followed her out and she led him to the fallen tree and ducked in among the branches.

"What is it? Where's Snowfur?" he squeaked. "Is she playing hide-and-seek?"

"Come here." Bluefur wrapped her tail around his small body and pulled him close, sheltering him beside her belly. She bent over him, shielding the sight of Adderfang carrying his mother's body into camp.

She felt her heart crack. So much pain. "Snowfur won't be coming back."

Whitekit looked up at her. "Till when?"

"Ever."

"Why not?" Whitekit stiffened. "Doesn't she love me anymore?"

"She loves you very much." Bluefur promised. "She'll always love you. But she's with Starclan now."

Whitekit put his head to one side. "Can I visit her?"

Bluefur shook her head.

"Goosefeather and Featherwhisker visit Starclan all the time," Whitekit argued. "I can do it too."

"It's not that easy." With every word, Buefur felt herself getting more and more lost. How would she ever make him understand without breaking his heart? She gazed into his round blue eyes. The pain of Snowfur's death was not hers alone. She was going to have to break his heart.

"She's dead, Whitekit. You won't see her anymore. You won't smell her or hear her or feel her fur next to yours ever again."

Robinwing nosed her way through the branches. "I'll feed you and you'll share my nest with Frostkit and Brindlekit." she soothed.

Whitekit spat at her, "I don't want your milk or your nest! I want Snowfur!"
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Comments: 110

gdpr-21428769 In reply to ??? [2013-09-19 23:02:32 +0000 UTC]

bluestar's prophecy

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Bluesoul4 In reply to ??? [2011-12-15 21:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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M00N-KITTEN In reply to Bluesoul4 [2011-12-15 22:36:32 +0000 UTC]

thabk you

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Mew44 [2011-09-19 19:56:20 +0000 UTC]

I love snowfur! It should have been those shadowclan cats.

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Dark-crystal-wolf [2011-07-11 02:06:52 +0000 UTC]

;( I cried for about 5 minutes when I read that part in the book. So sad...

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neutralchao59 [2011-06-17 13:41:30 +0000 UTC]

That is super sad. I have never read that part of the book before yet. But that is just sad. I can feel tears in my eyes right now. *sniffle*

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CatWolfWarrior [2011-05-26 20:58:55 +0000 UTC]

I cried too

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little-chibi-warrior [2011-05-16 21:10:16 +0000 UTC]

CCCCCCCCCCCCRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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natureheart123 [2011-05-13 12:00:00 +0000 UTC]

i practicly balled my eyes out my cat died beause he was hit by a car when it hapend they didnt even stopped they just sped away

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SkyTigers [2011-02-19 11:25:14 +0000 UTC]

TYPO!!! I meant auntie.... lol

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SkyTigers [2011-02-19 11:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Poor little Whitekit.... i didn't know Bluestar was his uncle...

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SkyTigers In reply to ??? [2011-02-19 11:23:56 +0000 UTC]

I shouldn't have read this, because I haven't read bluestar's prophecy yet... but I couldn't resist... THIS IS SOO SAD! Its so weird reading that Tigerkit was chasing Brindlekit's tail, because later on Tigerstar kills Brindleface...

P.s i didn't know Brindleface and Frostfur were sisters...

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ArtMadParvati [2011-02-06 11:24:56 +0000 UTC]

:iconsadplz

I cried too

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xXxCrystalheartxXx [2011-02-02 23:18:48 +0000 UTC]

i was on the bus when i was reading and started crying

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Tricktryumph [2011-01-27 16:03:20 +0000 UTC]

I did too...

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thepiercats [2011-01-11 16:17:28 +0000 UTC]

ok, this death wasn't as sad, but it shows just how evil authors can be.

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vampiress9876 In reply to ??? [2010-11-20 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]

i cry when all the cats die

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Orakaila In reply to ??? [2010-11-08 02:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Very sad. I cried too.

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Esrohs In reply to ??? [2010-11-03 06:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Does Whitekit grow up to be Whitestorm?

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Esrohs [2010-11-03 10:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Yup yup ^^

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SquirrelGrrl772 [2010-09-19 16:00:08 +0000 UTC]

I almost cried when Snowfur died. The saddest part was Whitekit, it was cute but sad.
I cry for Bluefur all she wanted was to be a warrior. She didn't ask for her mother, sister and kit to die!

Bluestar's Prophecy is without a doubt the Warriors book w/ the most feeling and the best. (Speaking of this book I'm rereading ti for the 3rd time)

But poor Bluestar...

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SquirrelGrrl772 In reply to SquirrelGrrl772 [2010-09-19 16:10:20 +0000 UTC]

**it

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Star7686 [2010-08-29 00:59:52 +0000 UTC]

AAAND I cried from when Mosskit died 'till the end of the book. I also cried when Snowfur died, but I stopped eventually :3

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Siver-69 In reply to ??? [2010-08-25 01:44:30 +0000 UTC]

ahh i am cring in hear points to heart

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lux-rayne13 [2010-07-27 13:18:03 +0000 UTC]

awww... poor little whitekit...

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Apple-Fruit [2010-07-18 04:49:10 +0000 UTC]

You're not the only who cried!

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BlueFrostPaw [2010-07-08 04:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Raises hand high and proud-
You bet.
I really didn't like Bluestar the first time I read "Into the Wild", because I felt she was just kinda a stuck-up she-cat everyone likes.
But then when I read "Bluestar's Prophecy", I instantly fell in love with her and Snowfur.
I feel so bad for Bluestar.
Hugs Snowfur and Bluefur-

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SirenaDragon [2010-05-28 23:10:19 +0000 UTC]

i cried to
it was just to hardd to handle

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to SirenaDragon [2010-05-28 23:22:55 +0000 UTC]

they had to make it so....sad

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kk-bffl [2010-04-30 15:01:31 +0000 UTC]

me too!

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YellowfangOfStarclan [2010-04-25 23:45:52 +0000 UTC]

i cried when i read it in the book, when i watch AMVs that show it, and when i just read it again in your description. She is with StarClan though, and now so is her son and Bluestar. (plus their mother Moonflower is there too) i wish they didn't have to die though....

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to YellowfangOfStarclan [2010-04-25 23:53:01 +0000 UTC]

i never found any amv's with it! can u gimmie the link to one??

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YellowfangOfStarclan In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-26 01:00:06 +0000 UTC]

of cores! ^^
these two made me cry when i saw them, then again i cry real easily and i watched these right after i read the book, either way here are saom AMVs- [link] [link]

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Cynderforever [2010-04-25 14:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Awww, I don't remember this, but, reading it makes e wanna cry!

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 14:43:33 +0000 UTC]

it's in Bluestar's prophecy, the super edition

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Cynderforever In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-25 14:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I don't have that one yet, I need to get it, I read Firestar's quest, took me forever to, but not Bluestar's prophecy!

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 14:50:11 +0000 UTC]

awww, too bad! its a great book :]

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Angelcloud0090 In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-08-16 14:19:37 +0000 UTC]

it is a good book in fact im drawing random scenes from it! that and moonflower's death was the worst parts in it...

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Cynderforever In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-25 14:54:04 +0000 UTC]

It looks like it, i'm outa stuff to read, maybe I can drag my mom to Borders! And get it, or, Sunset, I think it was sunset, *looks in last book* no, Sunrise, the 1 after Long Shadows, I was soooo surprised about Squirrelflight not being the mother, but, wait, have you read it yet?

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 15:00:13 +0000 UTC]

i have read and own the whole series. fadin echoes is the best yet

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Cynderforever In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-25 15:05:48 +0000 UTC]

OK, yeah, I was shocked about Squirrelflight's secret, I heard that Hollyleaf was Crowfeather and Leafpool's kit, that makes sence why she has no power, and the 'leaf' part of her name. And, I hope I dont bother you with all this, but, when Ashfur died, I was thinking, Squirrelflight killed him, he knew too much, so she killed him, am I right?

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 15:12:24 +0000 UTC]

...do you really want to know? and what makes you think that just because hlooy is leafs kit that she would have to be powerless? what about her brothers?

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Cynderforever In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-25 15:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I really want to know, but, your right, she is still a kin of Firestar's kin, but, maybe it has something to do with the fact that Leafpool is a medicine cat, and they can't have kits. But, where did Dovepaw even come from? And, I was reading a preview of Fading Echos, and it says Jayfeather has the role of sole medicene cat, does Leafpool die?

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 15:18:07 +0000 UTC]

no... and Holleyleaf killed ashfur. Are you sure u want to know spoilers ? some people get mad and say i ruin the books for them

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Cynderforever In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-25 15:19:50 +0000 UTC]

H-Hollyleaf? *faints* yes, I want to know, at least of what hapened to Leafpool, she's one of my faves.

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 15:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Well, she quit her duty as a medicine cat and became a warrior because...hollyleaf killed ashfur cuz he knew the secret of their birth and would expell it at the gathering. She was so upset when they found out who there parents were. she told everyone at the gathering anyways and squirrel+bramble=XXX leaf+medicine duties=XXX Hollyleaf=XXX

XXX=no more

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Cynderforever In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-25 15:45:21 +0000 UTC]

so what happens to Hollyleaf?

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 15:46:44 +0000 UTC]

She ran away when cats were very unhappy with her choice of telling the secret, she tried to get leaf to eat deathberries, she ran into the fox tunnels in a rain storm and the ceiling colapsed on her

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Cynderforever In reply to RavenfeatherForever [2010-04-25 15:49:56 +0000 UTC]

She tried to kill Leafpool? Her mom? And then, she died? *sobs* I always liked her, I never though she would kill a member of her clan, and then, die...

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RavenfeatherForever In reply to Cynderforever [2010-04-25 15:54:20 +0000 UTC]

she's evil ;-;. she built her life on the warrior code and to learn she was born against the code broke her. she went to the med den and got out the berries. leaf cam and she blocked the entrace. "You dont deserve to live!Eat these!" holly said. then leaf is like "Do u think dying for me would be harder for me than living?" holly let her go and ran away and died ;-;

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