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Published: 2002-02-10 01:28:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 239; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 19
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Description this is my first upload to DeviantArt. Tell me how it is or at least what i could do to improve on it or on my skills.
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ekud [2002-02-16 04:16:41 +0000 UTC]

the object itself isnt bad.... the background is all choopy and noisy: doesnt go well with a smooth focal point..... the grid is also off, its too out there and blunt,.. this just needs some more thought put into the compositional side of it
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robc [2002-02-16 03:17:40 +0000 UTC]

not really a specialist at this kinda stuff but this looks kinda freaky - maybe u could play on that?


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