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I wanted to draw an updated version of this old artwork: [link]Feel free to critique
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Comments: 86
Scarrrr [2013-02-14 17:57:51 +0000 UTC]
i love how detailed this is! (david bowie, what a nice touch haaha)
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dikarya [2013-02-03 08:03:54 +0000 UTC]
i like how you uploaded this on david bowie'd birthday... with a david bowie album. and then he goes ahead and announces that he's giving out a new album. are you psychic or something? xD
but yes, critique... the old picture showed very many items, with a lot of detail, yet most of the items were too small for it to be possible to see said details. this picture, however, is clearer, so that much more of the details can be appreciated. the shop in this version also looks more messy and crammed, whereas that other version, although it had many items, looked a tad too neat and arranged. you also do a better job focusing on and drawing the attention to the guy in this picture. in the other one, he kind of just drowned in all the details. okay, i can't be bothered to give more thought-through comments.
it's awesome. oh, and KNIIIIIIVES!
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Macabeak [2013-01-14 12:29:06 +0000 UTC]
You know that "Draw It Again" meme? This. This is what I always hope to see - a complete redux that still keeps the original feel, but shows better abilities in more than just technical skills. (Like, layout and such.) Does that make any sense?
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Ikonion [2013-01-09 11:26:10 +0000 UTC]
I like both versions, but this feels more lively or ..say... don't no badass?
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Flaming-Scorpion [2013-01-09 03:33:23 +0000 UTC]
ahhhh I love the arrow collars poster and all of the details in this. so fantastic.
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AnzennaArtz [2013-01-09 02:51:08 +0000 UTC]
Holy banana, I love this! Nice work and I certainly prefer this to the other (not that there is anything wrong with it, its mainly the perspective I like.)
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AcheronHades [2013-01-09 01:22:05 +0000 UTC]
This is just too cool, and I kind've want his t-shirt : ) Nice work!
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UpVice [2013-01-09 01:10:48 +0000 UTC]
eee! Love how he's now wearing the hat from the shelf in the older version.
Lovely work on the glass. So much great stuff, one could keep looking at this piece for a long time.
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megamus-prime [2013-01-09 00:17:19 +0000 UTC]
Bowie-!!
Hahah, awesome, awesome piece. I like that it has a focus, yet there are so many cool details to check out, you can spend minutes just letting your eyes roam over everything. I have no critique because this is obviously way above my skill level. OTL
I eagerly look forward to more!
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leftb4right [2013-01-08 22:12:10 +0000 UTC]
im digging the arrow collar man and the chaplin poster
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CaptMadman-GenMarks [2013-01-08 20:04:17 +0000 UTC]
Love it! It's got so much more personality than the original.
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Chantasticart [2013-01-08 19:38:51 +0000 UTC]
Definitely a lot more improvement from the old work, very nice job!
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monkeybank [2013-01-08 18:35:54 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is fantastic. i really enjoy all the fun details and imagination, and i love his expression and body posture.
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ChineseFightinMuffin [2013-01-08 17:04:20 +0000 UTC]
Your attention to detail is exquisite! I adore the sullen expression on Jupiter's face( I presume that is his name), in a jungle of so many fun items he seems so dismal. All the quirky goods that keep the eye at play is oh so fun and the melancholy way in which each item is kept as opposed to your old artwork is much more effective visually to me personally. A wonderful creation and expression of great talent and personality, well done and may you continue with such splendid artworks
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tarorae [2013-01-08 16:31:13 +0000 UTC]
I love all the little details! Like the stylish old radio up on the shelf and the Lawrence of Arabia poster...
He looks really bored, though. I think I'd enjoy working in a shop like that, personally!
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Kiflon [2013-01-08 15:40:09 +0000 UTC]
David Bowie record!
Lovely piece,I really like the way you color stuff you match colors really nicely!
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Piraiyah [2013-01-08 14:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Fun piece!
Speaking of bowie (the poster/painting up to the left), he has actually risen from the dead and released a new single TODAY!
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Vulpine-Designs [2013-01-08 13:38:54 +0000 UTC]
I love the hat... The hat he is wearing makes the whole picture for me
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yaoistalker [2013-01-08 12:53:46 +0000 UTC]
looks like he got more stuff over time an looks great
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Mari-Keiyou [2013-01-08 12:43:45 +0000 UTC]
You made such a great leap! Right down to the hat on his head.
You probably get this a lot, but you are one of my idols.
May you stay awesome for years and years!
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DRAKERE [2013-01-08 12:10:45 +0000 UTC]
definately prefer this one to the original, more clutered making it feel more authentic. So hard to decide what makes it as good as it is, I think just the overall thinking, from the incomplete signs to the weird gas masks. hee hee
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Shattered-Earth [2013-01-08 12:08:22 +0000 UTC]
wow i love seeing how your style evolved, how this is much more illustrative and graphic the only critiques i have (if you can even call it that) is that the figure is ever so slightly off center, not quite at the 3/rd line but not quite centered either, the black poster really brings it out. Not a big deal, if it were a real issue it would be solved by a simple crop anyway. Slight perspective issue too, compare the top of the wooden shelf on the left (with the swords) to the rack on the left (under the employees only sign) and the wood shelves lining the back, again minor fixes if they were enough to care about anyway pshhhh.
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