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Rhinehartd — Jill Rhodes Part 1 Chapter 1

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Description * Note: The coloring was done by wonderful artist and good friend, ayanamifan. Without him I wouldn't have found the motivation to finally get this series going.

A Eurasian girl by the name of Dawn was born with a special genetic gift: she could build muscle mass with incredible ease and speed, well past human limits. This trait came into fruition at the end of her puberty, where she discovered that simple exercises yielded dramatic results, and her strength increased exponentially, allowing her to lift heavier weights and thus build muscle at a more rapid pace. She would eventually put on over a hundred pounds of bulk over the course of a year, with her body achieving peak muscularity by the time she turned 21. When she was invited onto a variety show to lift an enormous 800 kilogram barbell, Dawn discovered her body quickly adapted to the resistance of the weight by growing in muscle mass in a few seconds. This evolution in her genetic "gift" meant that she could potentially have unlimited strength. She would later achieve a degree of fame, and would travel to China for the Olympics, winning the United States a gold medal in weightlifting.

Her success piqued the interest of the Chinese Olympic Committee, who had Dawn swabbed for blood and urine samples. A team of scientists were assembled to find a way to "mass produce" Dawn's genetic gift into a serum, so the Chinese could apply it to their athletes in the future. Because the serum would contain genetic material derived from a female, it was decided that for safety reasons it be administered only to females in Dawn's age range. Eventually, a quantity of the "Dawn Serum" was derived, and tested on a 16 year old girl named Li Hua. The first thing the serum did to Li Hua was induce an uncontrollable urge to lift weights and gain muscle. The second thing it did was weaken the genetic barriers present in all females that kept them from developing large muscles. In a very short period of time, Li Hua transformed herself from a meek, skinny five foot girl into a six foot, hulking mass of muscle. Her athletic abilities skyrocketed as well. However, Li Hua's transformation invoked severe emotional trauma on her and her family. She was complete alienated from everyone around her and was seen as a freak. Still, the committee agreed that the serum was a complete success, and with more supervision, their future athletes would win more medals for China without attracting suspicion.

Li Hua was then brought to the States by a sympathetic scientist who had worked on the serum. She was put through many months of therapy and studying by American scientists trying to understand her condition and the serum that caused her muscle growth. While the condition she inherited was deemed to be permanent, she worked with both mental and physical therapists to slowly reduce her muscle mass to more manageable levels that allowed her to move about in public without arousing attention, as well as fight the urge to gain it all back with an out-of-control workout. Living under the Chinese scientist's roof, and enrolled in college, she started a new life and lived in peace. She would later meet Dawn, the girl whose DNA served as a catalyst for her physical change. Compared to Li Hua, who was now about the size of a medium-weight bodybuilder and weighed 140 pounds, Dawn had embraced her muscularity and was a good 300 pounds of muscle. The two became fast friends, and Dawn would help Li Hua come to terms with her ordeal and eased her into the more accepting and free-spirited American culture.

While Li Hua went on to live a stable life and leave the past behind her, the legacy of Dawn's "special" DNA would not die there. Back in China, the government's sports authority was now busy destroying evidence of the serum and all records of Li Hua. Now that their top secret "test subject" had been brought to the States, they had to get rid of anything that would jeopardize their standing with the Olympic Committee and their chances of Olympic gold in the future. However, one over-zealous member of the team that developed the "Dawn serum" managed to keep a sample of it. He had synthesized the serum before-hand; enough to fill up a syringe bottle, then sold it on the black market for a large sum of cash. The Dawn serum was then purchased by a sports and health pharmacy based in California called V-Fit, seeking to use it to develop a new line of protein powder.

Enter Jill Rhodes, an 18 year old girl studying at Portsdown High in Santa Monica. Jill stood about five feet and five inches tall, and had looks that many of the guys at school would go berserk over. She worked out daily, resulting in a body that was toned and athletic. She was also a part-time model, earning extra cash for herself by posing for teen magazines. In short, she was the ultimate high school boy's fantasy: blonde, blue eyes, pretty, and fit. Amongst many of the guys at Portsdown High, Jill was regarded at the top of the pyramid of the hottest girls to be associated with, in more ways than just friendship.

Despite her incredible looks, Jill was a rebel at heart, and regarded high school culture with disdain. She looked at the guys who constantly oggled at her as stereotypes, as mindless imbeciles who treated women as objects and not people. She viewed many of the girls who tried to befriend her based on her looks as equally shallow, only associating with other girls who looked as good as them. By being good looking herself, Jill was often "accepted" amongst the popular kids, and she would play her part and put up a facade of friendliness, albeit with an underlying tone of sarcasm and wit. Although she was regarded as one of the hottest girls on campus, Jill regularly turned down every request for a date, or any kind of physical encounter with a guy.

Jill was also fond of conducting acts of sabotage against who she perceived as the useful idiots whose sole purpose was to be victims for her amusement: the jocks, cheerleaders, bimbos, the preppy students, and so on. From planting stink bombs in the boy's locker room before football practice, to turning off the lights in the auditorium during a complicated cheerleading routine, to calling the police during parties filled with under-aged drinking, Jill was truly a hell-raiser for the high school stereotypes. Yet no one suspected her of any wrong-doing, because of her ability to make her victims think she was one of them.

Jill lived with her parents in Santa Monica. Her dad had to make frequent business trips to Shanghai, while her mum worked a regular 9 to 5 job and spent most of her time outside of her job doing more paper work at home. Life could get lonely for most kids in that situation, but for Jill it only instilled an independent and free-spirited personality. Fortunately, she kept a circle of very close friends who would sometimes participate in her antics. Her closest friend was Rhonda, whom she knew since middle school. Rhonda worked as an intern at the V-Fit Sports Pharmacy, hoping to advance a potential career in pharmaceuticals. After school and work she and Jill would often go to the gym together to work out, and on the weekends the two and their friends would all hang out. They were indeed a very close knit bunch.
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Comments: 12

urza2 [2012-10-03 02:10:28 +0000 UTC]

This is a really great piece. Look forward to seeing her grow, someday!

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Blahooha [2010-11-15 20:51:13 +0000 UTC]

When are you going to countinue the story? I cant wait! Your stories are awesome!

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wardrider99 [2010-09-16 08:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Very nice.

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Xan2172000 [2010-09-10 00:41:55 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see where this goes... considering Li Hua went from: [link] to [link] and Jill seems to have a bit of a head start

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mr-shhh [2010-09-08 15:31:56 +0000 UTC]

Great pic! Nice subtle muscle, well-rendered clothing. Ayanamifan'c coloring is sharp too. I'm a happy man knowing you've got new stuff!

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elee0228 [2010-09-08 13:19:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm really impressed with the coloring job on this pic.

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fbbSURGE [2010-09-07 20:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Yey. You are back!!

Can't wait to see this evolve.

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GoddessMynnie [2010-09-06 12:33:24 +0000 UTC]

You do COLOR?!?!??! *SHOCKED* (Of course you do. Though I think this is the first time you did color with this line of stories but wow!.)

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19chucki74 [2010-09-06 03:07:19 +0000 UTC]

The 'Dawn Serum' lives on...

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Splicerion [2010-09-05 22:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Great teamwork, man.

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compoundx [2010-09-05 22:47:55 +0000 UTC]

wow really nice story and art

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ayanamifan [2010-09-05 22:45:35 +0000 UTC]

ah there she is finally ^_^ nice writing!

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