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Here’s the 20th page of the first issue of me and my bestest best pal OptimuzYT2022 ’s rewrite, as you can see, Millie doesn’t get easily defeated by a bottle to the face, we decided to lengthen out the battle to show Millie can’t be taken down so easily. There were more punching and dodging, but I decided to simplify it to this. And Millie’s dialogue in panel 1 shows us how Millie doesn’t want to fight, but is left with little option

Description
Here’s the 20th page of the first issue of me and my bestest best pal OptimuzYT2022 ’s rewrite, as you can see, Millie doesn’t get easily defeated by a bottle to the face, we decided to lengthen out the battle to show Millie can’t be taken down so easily. There were more punching and dodging, but I decided to simplify it to this. And Millie’s dialogue in panel 1 shows us how Millie doesn’t want to fight, but is left with little option