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Published: 2010-02-22 06:53:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 643; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 32
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Model Ashley oh Yessplease comment and critique - feedback is GREATLY appreciated.
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I quite like this piece for a number of reasons. Firstly, the texture contrast is quite eye catching, with the spider-web style construct of the cracked windshield contrasted with the model's striped shirt behind it. Very visually interesting there. The pose and placement of the model is spot on too. Her expression is good, very calm and almost neutral, very well contrasted with the violent and jagged hints of stress on the car about her.
As for the few slight issues/partial negatives, I feel like the framing could be tighter around the top of the car. A bit too much sky and the tree is a bit visually distracting. Hope these viewpoints help, and overall, very interesting and well-presented photo!
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