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Months grouped together like careless footstepsstroll upon the lashings accorded to me by the sun.
In January I am caressed by ghosts
or something as cold and invisible.
They intrude upon hair, clothes; books
dampen with monstrous hand prints.
Are these shells of half-dead creatures
holding themselves, ancient in a cavern somewhere
or tethered to the earth by thought?
Bits of cloud, the flesh of heaven
picked off like a soft disease
nestle on my shoulder as if pulled from my sweater.
they emerge quietly like droplets of blood. Whisper:
we are the teeth of ancient things.
White drift presses upon the house
and the window. Its cool breath scales
my chin, pries open my mouth like a tenacious lover,
and settles with a small sigh on the tongue
like a hiss of steam.
We have made and unmade warmth.
Angry flakes brandish their sharp
edges in a dance of swords as they tumble,
and the sigh on my tongue becomes a shriek
as they meet flesh and disappear--
The last dying things of winter.
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Comments: 19
LesCheveux [2008-03-27 22:40:50 +0000 UTC]
and the sigh on my tongue becomes a shriek
as they meet flesh and disappear--
and thus I fell in love with this poem.
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xxJ0YL0VENiMExx [2008-03-22 06:22:37 +0000 UTC]
the imagery is so beautiful. congratulations on the dd.
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strawberryglitter [2008-03-21 23:12:52 +0000 UTC]
i never wanted it to end, every line took my breath away. the way you word things is so unusual and beautiful
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Lyricalicious [2008-03-21 20:09:16 +0000 UTC]
oh my... yes loved every word of it... keep up the beautiful imagery... and that first line was lovely...
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CharliePM [2008-03-21 18:49:05 +0000 UTC]
Incredibly wonderful, brilliant images. Well done.
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BonJerome [2008-03-21 18:01:37 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool. I especially like the third stanza. Beautiful words, all.
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seasiren717 [2008-03-21 16:41:46 +0000 UTC]
that is .......wow, i cant even descrice how this makes me feel......very articulate and wonderful use of imagery
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qbeentraining [2008-03-21 13:26:53 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful poem, I can almost hear someone reading it outloud, but very softly.....
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hhryah [2008-03-21 11:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely stunning way of describing something that is often too cliched because of its familiarity.
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Dai-ba [2008-03-21 10:22:51 +0000 UTC]
this is great
^^ very nice i was captured by it inmediatly
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Angelkitteh [2008-03-21 07:29:08 +0000 UTC]
"Bits of cloud, the flesh of heaven"
I love that. Gorgeous poem.
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dragonaholic [2008-03-21 07:16:07 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful! =O
I love the imagery in the second and third stanzer the most. Lovely lovely lovely
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