randomthought [2004-06-05 14:21:43 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful Luke you are pretty amazing you know that?!

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bigred2 [2004-05-31 03:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah mate, not bad... not my favorite of your works, but it is effective at getting the point across and made me think... so, that is all good

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NakedPoesy [2004-05-27 07:19:41 +0000 UTC]

the flows a bit off. but I love the simplistic question it proposes. good thoughts.

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angelscream [2004-05-26 21:53:56 +0000 UTC]

I tend not to like short poems but I like this, short, meaningful, and to the point. Good Job!

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dangerousdave [2004-05-26 12:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Good poem.

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the-figurehead [2004-05-26 11:34:56 +0000 UTC]

It's really good Luke.

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jendal [2004-05-26 09:58:13 +0000 UTC]

these are the type of poems i like, short, meaningful and with good rhythm

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Lizabell [2004-05-26 07:51:22 +0000 UTC]

great poem luke, you captured the feeling real well. i am sickened too!

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