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LordDarkWraith [2016-11-09 23:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Is it still black rose

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LectorCuldera [2014-06-21 03:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Novice Regina looks like a real person. she looks like someone who has lead a hard life, and has a story to tell. i can't put this into the right words, but you have done your job and done it spectacularly. God bless you sir.

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Ledolicious [2014-03-29 06:18:44 +0000 UTC]

You are talented man, I know this is really late, but I guess better late than never; only thing I'd say is that you don't want to overload the reader with too many characters or too much information right from the beginning. It's a little intimidating and most people look for things they can pick up quickly to really enjoy the story as it unfolds; I always look at the cover page as a way to get the reader primed, and ready for the first scene and give them a good grasp on who may be the focus of the starting plot.  Other than that I really like the work, this has a feel of splash art, something that you would put on a game cover for fans that are already well aware of the characters, plot, theme, etc.  I would be a little more subtle and give the reader a focal point.  Keep it up. And let me know when you are selling books.  I want one!!!

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