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Aaraas [2014-05-17 03:04:51 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS MORE LIKE A CRITIQUE, JUST SAYING THAT IN ADVANCE(PLZ DON'T HATE ME!!! T~T). MINATO IS FINE AND SO IS THE BLACK STUFF(BLOOD), THE BACKGROUND IS GOOD TOO. RIN... THE ONLY THING I SEE THAT SHOULD BE FIXED IS HER FACE... IT LOOKS A BIT TOO LONG, IT SHOULD BE FAIRLY SIMPLE FOR YOU TO FIX THAT LITTLE ISSUE. AND OBITO... UM... WELL HIS HANDS HAVE A BIT TOO MUCH BLOOD COVERING THEM(THEY SEEM AS THOUGH, TO ME, THAT THEY'VE BEEN CHOPPED OFF). UM... PLZ PLZ PLZZZZ... D-DON'T HATE ME FOR THIS!! I DO REALLY LIKE THIS!! I PROMISE!!! THE PLOT AND EVERYTHING, I... I JUST... WANNA HELP YOU MAKE IT EVEN BETTER. EVEN IF IT IS JUST AN EENSY BIT. I AM UBBER SORRY IF I OFFENDED OR... ANYTHING NEGATIVE I MAY HAVE JUST ACCIDENTALLY CAUSED(IF I DID... YOU KNOW).

P.S.: SORRY ABOUT THE CAPITAL LETTER THINGY. EH HEH. I'M JUST A BIT TOO LAZY TO TURN IT OFF. ^^'
(I' M USUALLY IN MY BED IN MY PILLOWS PASSED OUT IN WRAPPED UP IN MY FLUFFY BLANKY COCOON)

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