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Work in-progress of a propaganda poster in my universe, Darkstar Chronicles.

I need help basically in changing the visor design. I'm not a fan of it after consideration. Looks too similar to Boba Fett or a Mandalorian beskar helm altogether.
I tried being a little geometric with the outline itself, but idk, it still looks off. Your thoughts? What would you change? I haven't gotten into detail yet, I'm not planning on using color, I may.
here's a short description to give an idea of the theme I'm going for in this particular piece -
Depicts a Neo-Roman centurion standing proudly, with a reflection of Earth & the Moon seen in the visor's reflection. The New Roman Empire is based on Titan, moon of Saturn.
Will include a stylistic image of Saturn & Titan in the background.
The Latin text; IUNGO, AUT FAME translates to JOIN, OR STARVE (hunger).
It's probably not very accurate, so if it's not I apologize.
When the NRE central body was exiled to Titan, they were left with a challenge of harvesting food & developing sustained agriculture. A very primitive terraforming device was given to them among their life support resources when the newly formed United Terran Commonwealth banished the empire to Titan following the recapture of Rome. They were already a xenophobic society prior to the war in regards to non-humans mostly, extraterrestrials, or people afflicted (or volunteered) by the Primorpha virus. (animal mutational stuff, I'll go over that in deets on another piece). When the Zir (Greys) signed a treaty with the UTC to end their millennia-long pacifism and aid in the war effort. Seeing as the Roman's titanium-alloy & red matter based firepower was very effective against even the best of Terra's defensive capabilities.
Most food is extremely bland, processed, or in the form of dehydrated protein blocks. Which is another leading reason among the Romans for why they want to annex Terra and return to a lush world.

Description
Work in-progress of a propaganda poster in my universe, Darkstar Chronicles.

I need help basically in changing the visor design. I'm not a fan of it after consideration. Looks too similar to Boba Fett or a Mandalorian beskar helm altogether.
I tried being a little geometric with the outline itself, but idk, it still looks off. Your thoughts? What would you change? I haven't gotten into detail yet, I'm not planning on using color, I may.
here's a short description to give an idea of the theme I'm going for in this particular piece -
Depicts a Neo-Roman centurion standing proudly, with a reflection of Earth & the Moon seen in the visor's reflection. The New Roman Empire is based on Titan, moon of Saturn.
Will include a stylistic image of Saturn & Titan in the background.
The Latin text; IUNGO, AUT FAME translates to JOIN, OR STARVE (hunger).
It's probably not very accurate, so if it's not I apologize.
When the NRE central body was exiled to Titan, they were left with a challenge of harvesting food & developing sustained agriculture. A very primitive terraforming device was given to them among their life support resources when the newly formed United Terran Commonwealth banished the empire to Titan following the recapture of Rome. They were already a xenophobic society prior to the war in regards to non-humans mostly, extraterrestrials, or people afflicted (or volunteered) by the Primorpha virus. (animal mutational stuff, I'll go over that in deets on another piece). When the Zir (Greys) signed a treaty with the UTC to end their millennia-long pacifism and aid in the war effort. Seeing as the Roman's titanium-alloy & red matter based firepower was very effective against even the best of Terra's defensive capabilities.
Most food is extremely bland, processed, or in the form of dehydrated protein blocks. Which is another leading reason among the Romans for why they want to annex Terra and return to a lush world.