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movement Ii walk upon the stage
my mind and heart
a tormented rage
no cast or crew
no lights or sound
only regrets all around
i read my lines
but nobody knows
i long the day the curtain will close
a one act pllay
the first, the last
if i waste my time has passed
im afraid i might trip and fall
i wish i could slow time down
or better yet, turn it around
a missed line is a bitter fall
when people watching me
is one, not all
my play is played
my song is sung
but the act's not over i havent won
theres still a chance to redeem myself
for that one missed line
will i chance it or take my spot in back of the line
movement II
back stage i see all
i see the laughs, the smacks, the falls
i change the set
to make a fantasy come true
no one but me knows the truth
about the plywood hills, the plastic rocks
and the sun that isnt really there
all in black i slink around
waiting, watching, for the lights and sound
the audience's bliss amuse me
the oblivious fools know not the taste of truth
the actors' arrogance angers me
they know not the sweat of changing the world
i change the world, i make the rain
the silent one, and no one knows my pain.
movement III
this opera must end
the last song must come
the villain must die
the hero must have won
but what if it doesnt
what if there is no last song
what if the hero dies
what if evil has won
the script is unclear
on what the actors should do
from now on its improv
here the story comes out, and who is who
they finish the act to roaring applause
they put on a smile
for the family and friends
they take out their paper, they take out their pens.
the costumes come off
and put onto a rack
the stage is destroyed
the plywood hills put back
i took the chance
to redeem myself
for that damn missed line
i won't take my spot in the back of the line
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Comments: 5
wolfmaid [2005-03-24 04:25:34 +0000 UTC]
good to see poetry thats not about how much life sucks and we all want to die!
like they said: the movements idea=very well done
i cant say anything to make this better
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skueaks [2005-03-24 04:12:08 +0000 UTC]
movement one should have some sort of static rhyme scheme, not jumping between aba or abb
a one act pllay typo
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Kafei911 [2005-03-23 22:07:25 +0000 UTC]
wow, I like the whole movement idea. This helps put a new perspective on everyone's situation. Great idea, D. Payne!
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Kafei911 [2005-03-23 22:07:24 +0000 UTC]
wow, I like the whole movement idea. This helps put a new perspective on everyone's situation. Great idea, D. Payne!
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