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ScarletFire — ~.Fallen Angel.~
Published: 2004-05-21 20:49:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 16154; Favourites: 330; Downloads: 2757
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Description Fallen Angel

She hides in the shadows, sheilding her face,
this child never laughs, this child never smiles.
Longing the warmth of a mother's embrace,
her body is broken from wandering miles.

Her face stained with tears, from nights when she cries,
she walks throgh the darkness, screaming their names.
Despite all the pain, her hope never dies,
she's searching to find the place whence she came.

They left her behind, did they even care?
She calls to the ones that watch from above.
She falls to the ground as her strength does wear,
all she ever wanted was to be loved.

As she takes her last breath, the light shines through,
because the devil was an angel too...
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Comments: 68

JulesTheNorweegie [2008-03-24 20:40:15 +0000 UTC]

It is a very good poem
Well done! It has this strength to it.
What book was it?

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Invidius [2008-02-25 01:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Did you make this? It's amazing!

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yianne21 [2007-11-30 07:06:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you know that you're talented...

Just to let you know, this poem got my attention.


So I'll affirm that fact that you're really talented.

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UchihaSakura96 [2007-08-07 22:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh Mi Gosh this is sooooo gowd !!! Faved

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KIWI-Wuv-Gackt [2007-02-22 00:31:10 +0000 UTC]

congrats on this amazing poem getting published!

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fallen0angel089 [2006-04-07 00:38:08 +0000 UTC]

wow I love this poem, its very good

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ScarletFire In reply to fallen0angel089 [2006-04-08 16:56:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Angvil [2006-02-04 10:14:48 +0000 UTC]

i love it.... thats absolutly a fav for me

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ScarletFire In reply to Angvil [2006-02-04 15:14:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Me-Mellow [2004-05-24 17:03:17 +0000 UTC]

woow, this is amazing!!! shakespeare would be proud hehe, this really is cool

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ScarletFire In reply to Me-Mellow [2004-05-24 18:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^.^

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Anyima [2004-05-22 04:11:08 +0000 UTC]

woohooo rhyme!!!!!
when I write a poem I'm too lazy to make it rhyme hehehe

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ScarletFire In reply to Anyima [2004-05-22 12:09:23 +0000 UTC]

lol. This one had to have a particular ryming scheme. It was part of the assignment. Sonnets are a pain in the ass dammit >.<

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SanctusRequiem [2004-05-22 03:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good for a crappy ten minute homework assignment. And for once I'll fave something of yours O_o

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ScarletFire In reply to SanctusRequiem [2004-05-22 12:08:46 +0000 UTC]

Really? Wow...thats the SECOND fav this thing got. Had no idead it was THAT good...O_o

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nopsychosis [2004-05-21 21:00:11 +0000 UTC]

This is so good. And can't stress the so enough.

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ScarletFire In reply to nopsychosis [2004-05-21 23:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I really appreciate it. ^^

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