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schmoedraws — dawning rework - sketchpage
Published: 2009-12-10 22:47:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 8282; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 176
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lol this the third version of this i upload here... i had to make some changes... what annoyed me in the former version of this was the inconsitency of my character dawn.... i still dont feel like i have total control over her but i think it is an improvement....v1:[link]
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I actually love the updates, I think you're definitely getting more dead-on to that character. And she's so cute! Then that older girl... man, you draw some sexy women.
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The execution of panel three is flawless, it really leads the eye about effectively..
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Its great! As for inconsistency, its not that noticeable, but try making a maquette scuplture out of sculpey. I have one for my main comic character (14 inches high) that I make cloth costumes for... it helps immensely.
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Hah, that's why I can't draw comics - that's EXACTLY what happens - the characte gets away from me. They evolve quicker than I can follow
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This is a definite improvement. You're also getting really good at directing your viewers. Though the angles are changing a lot, the whole page is still very readable. Nice work on this!
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