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Published: 2007-08-31 08:00:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description Different countries, different regions, different rules
If don't take on each identity
The lights will be on you, until you see
Your head will be on papers around the world, what a fool.

Beyond the tip of every mug of coffee
There are eyes that can see the things that drinkers can't
It wouldn't be hard to give a damn, but it's too hard for them to
Regret their pasts.

There she is, holding her torch high above
But the world below her gets dimmer, she'll tire out soon, her arms drop down by her side

Just like all the by-standers with dumb faced looks, mouths opened wide.

And as it were, in the middle of nowhere, the centre of the red Earth
In the shadow of the Father Uluru, children play
But from the minds of twisted eyes they blend into the dirt

Hopeless isn't it?
If I were one
I'd do the same
But I think I'd at least know
That I;m chasing something
That won't run away
Get bored
And realized from my mistakes

But if I were them
Who sit there hopefully
Keep their mouths tightly closed
And their eyes wide open
And sit there in silence
Pretending that nothing is going on


Deluding your fears to face the darkness...only to be endowed by darkness...
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n-g-e [2007-08-31 22:08:55 +0000 UTC]

The concept is great, but you're kind of all over the place at the moment (I get the impression that the ideas you're putting accross are not quite connected yet - but maybe that's because of the open format of this poem...dunno...), but since this is a work in progress I'll be looking forward to reading it when it's "done". I do like where you're headed though

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