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“I will not go back …”
“You must …”
“Why do you insist”
“Because you know that I am right …”
“Insufferable little …”
“Shhhhhh …”
Hermione touched his lips lightly with trembling fingertips … stopping the last of his words from passing beyond his teeth … Severus turned away, a low whisper issued from him, anguished –dark, it was almost a moan … a plea which he knew would fall unheeded, dashed upon the cold indifferent tiles …
“No …” he said it once more … it cracked in his throat, his head sank slowly into his chest …
Hermione hated herself just then, overwhelmed by what she asked of him, the urgency of the moment tore at her, she felt cruel – something akin to betrayal, she had to convince him somehow … a way had to be found … she became desperate, time was running through her delicate fingers like quicksilver …
Severus pulled himself to his feet, he strode off unsteady … it was painful to watch, even more so to follow after him …
‘then you leave me no choice …’
She composed the thought … realizing at that very instant that he reacted to it with lightning speed, he wheeled, pouncing on her, wand out, he struck the time turner from her hand … it skidded across the floor out of reach … Severus grasped her by the wrist, his grip was fierce, painful – his face like carved stone, he drew himself over her, the darkness in his eyes fixed upon her …
"you leave me no choice …"
He repeated her thoughts, vocalizing them in a low menacing growl … his wand traced her cheek.
Hermione began to slip into the void … she saw his features shift from the raging turbulence to a soft tragic remorse, he faded from her vision … colors bled together … definition receded, she felt herself being lifted into his arms … the world closed in upon her … then nothing …
Nothing like a good solid tug of SSHG to dispel all of this Lily business on the air …
Sometimes TheMuse has a fierce grip on my pencil ... sure wish that would happen more often ... giggle ... :}
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Comments: 52
franka-michelle [2011-08-09 04:43:28 +0000 UTC]
okay, i'm sincerely sorry for my annoying confusion, but i did attempt to read comments in search for an answer and such ... but .... did you write this story / is it an except from an actual fiction?
if it is, i would enjoy reading it (aka: where can I find it?) and, if its not, what are you doing to my heart?! this needs to be written ...ahhh!
anyhow... superb, dear, as always
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Sempraseverus In reply to franka-michelle [2011-08-09 04:53:27 +0000 UTC]
nope ... I tend to write extentions to go along with some of my drawings ... they sometimes get out of hand ... I don't have the attention span to divulge any more than the Muse offers up ... sorry about that sweetie ...
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franka-michelle In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-08-09 06:07:13 +0000 UTC]
i think .... i think you just killed me! my heart, i feel it breaking in my chest ...
haha, nah, but yes, quite amazing. if you ever have a longer attention span be sure to start with this it's bloody brilliant!!
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Servina [2011-07-26 07:40:54 +0000 UTC]
can't wait to see what happens next
great job as always
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Sempraseverus In reply to Servina [2011-07-26 14:29:35 +0000 UTC]
thanx babe and squeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Rock-Leigh [2011-07-26 00:09:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm just a bit confused... Is it Severus who's refusing to go back?
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Sempraseverus In reply to Rock-Leigh [2011-07-26 00:45:02 +0000 UTC]
yeah ... its him ... Hermione was sent to retrieve him ... she is finding that more difficult than she had imagined ...
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Rock-Leigh In reply to Rock-Leigh [2011-07-26 00:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Lily? Who on Earth is Lily? Do we know her?
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Sempraseverus In reply to grace14518 [2011-07-25 21:53:15 +0000 UTC]
Severus likes it too ... :}
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Mafer-Potter [2011-07-25 20:54:04 +0000 UTC]
For some reason, I cannot enjoy SSHG like I did before DHp2 film... *sigh*
But this is great, as always...
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Sempraseverus In reply to Mafer-Potter [2011-07-25 21:18:26 +0000 UTC]
the reaction was the complete opposite for me ...
I like lily Potter even less now than before ...
At the risk of repeating myself ...
'She married the other guy Severus get over her ...'
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Art-Greylace [2011-07-25 19:06:18 +0000 UTC]
Ok, this is gross. He's a teacher! Stop desecrating his memory!
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Sempraseverus In reply to Art-Greylace [2011-07-25 21:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Are you serious?
Has someone unlatched the gate to the nursery again ... for fucks sake you infant ... if you find any of my art offensive then avoid visiting my gallery ...
you might like to touch bases with reality every now and again as well ... this is just fantasy camp ... not the real world ...
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Art-Greylace In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-26 03:30:36 +0000 UTC]
Fine. Sure.
But are you sure you're writing about hermione and Snape? 'cause that's not how I picture the characters.
In fact, the way I picture them, I think they'd retch at the very idea.
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Sempraseverus In reply to Art-Greylace [2011-07-26 03:55:37 +0000 UTC]
You again?
I certainly am quite sure - we obviously don't see things in the same light ... because I definately do see them together exceedingly ... in fact SSHG is my most popular ship ... True, it is an aquired taste ... yet if you do not like it, then you must avoid commenting negatively where it is posted so agressively and followed so strongly ...
and so there you have it ... that being clarified hopefully to your level of understanding ... I must insist that you take your opinion and your monkey elsewhere ...
don't come looking for conflict and to shit on my lawn ... you are obviously a trouble maker Art-Greylace ... go away ... and stay away because you are way out of your league ... I will report you if I must ... and remember others in this community are watching you ... and your rediculous little oppinion ... dont make a mistake that you will regret by harassing me any further ...
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MimiManderly In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-26 01:01:22 +0000 UTC]
LOLOL!!!
Oh, I love it when you get your dander up! Whooo-eee!!!
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Sempraseverus In reply to MimiManderly [2011-07-26 01:09:13 +0000 UTC]
It's just so god damned annoying ... when you get the odd sort that comes along with the single digit mental state ... I seldom get worked up ... but when somebody starts to mess with my playground ... I start pounding sand ... I was a bad kid ... my fuse was short and quick ... I'm much slower than I was then ...
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MimiManderly In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-26 01:56:08 +0000 UTC]
Beat her with your crutch, Sempra! Heehee!
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Sempraseverus In reply to MimiManderly [2011-07-26 02:13:02 +0000 UTC]
not worth the trouble ... besides I would rather draw ...
TO THE CURB WITH THAT TRASH ...
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MimiManderly In reply to Art-Greylace [2011-07-25 19:37:31 +0000 UTC]
You *can* simply avert your gaze, you know, and leave us to enjoy our obsessions.
Besides, after the hellish life he had, how can you begrudge him a little fun?
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Art-Greylace In reply to MimiManderly [2011-07-26 03:37:46 +0000 UTC]
I could. But it's fun to be a horrible little hyper-defensive prude sometimes. After all the horrible, nasty things done in my favourite fics, I kind of end up liking the reassurance that I do have limits, too.
As to the fun-I can't. But Hermione could and would in this position. As would most girls- face it. He's not an attractive man. Nor is his personality any kind of appealing. The only thing he has going for him is the force of his love for Lily. Of course, that's not to say he didn't suffer a whole lot more than deserved, but it doesn't really make him into any kind of suitable love interest, particularly for anyone other than Lily herself.
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MimiManderly In reply to Art-Greylace [2011-07-26 10:57:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh, please! You have a very limited idea of what is appealing. There is more to a man than what he looks like. He is an extremely intelligent man with a sardonic sense of humor, and -- as it turns out-- can love someone to a fault. Maybe YOU wouldn't find that suitable, but I would snap it up in a heartbeat! Don't make the mistake of judging what other people find appealing by your own rigid standards. Lily was never right for him. She simply was his first love, which is VERY seldom the right one. She had the misfortune of being killed and it was his fault, and he mistook the guilt he felt for eternal love. Had she lived, he would have been SO over her.
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Sempraseverus In reply to Art-Greylace [2011-07-26 04:05:52 +0000 UTC]
What the fuck!
Are you here to fuck with me some more? ...
you really need to get the fuck away from my page - you are creepy and a little slimey to boot ... this is the last warning I will give you ...
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Sempraseverus In reply to MimiManderly [2011-07-25 21:25:35 +0000 UTC]
Holy Hell Mimi ...
I hobble off for my apointment and come back for a major dose of purile diaperPoop ...
what's the world coming to I'd like to know ...
somebody is taking fantasyLand a wee bit too serious ...
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Sempraseverus In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-25 21:45:26 +0000 UTC]
Oi ... and Mimi ... I had forgotten they were out there ... BWUUuuuaaaaahahahahahaha ...
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MimiManderly In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-26 01:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Yes... this is why I LOATHE this place... all the children hanging about. Don't they know they should be seen and not heard?
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Sempraseverus In reply to MimiManderly [2011-07-26 01:11:26 +0000 UTC]
well, the scarey part of it is ... I think it might be an adult we are discussing here ...
That is much more disturbing ... wouldn't you agree ... :}
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Sempraseverus In reply to Raiderhater1013 [2011-07-25 21:19:02 +0000 UTC]
do you think? ... giggle ...
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ImperialCharles [2011-07-25 16:43:42 +0000 UTC]
Thats really really awesome! I love this pic oh so much! *___* <3
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Sempraseverus In reply to ImperialCharles [2011-07-25 16:45:57 +0000 UTC]
He is sOOoooOOOOO saturated in angst ... AIN'T IT COOL ... Push Severus into the pool again ...
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rouquinamour [2011-07-25 16:40:42 +0000 UTC]
Love her facial expressions and hand... and the fic
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Sempraseverus In reply to rouquinamour [2011-07-25 16:44:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanx sweetie ... owing to the current SSLE flap ... I was compelled to offer a fresh aproach to my SSHG Potterishness ...
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rouquinamour In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-25 20:32:28 +0000 UTC]
Haha same thing's happened to me... I kind of wanted to become immersed in a great SSLE fic, but instead found myself reading Second Life by Lariope, and if you haven't read it... it's such a great SSHG fic. Wow. Definitely got me back in the mood, although I am so torn between SSLE and SSHG in a way that I never would have been before... Damn you Alan Rickman for making me (kind of) ship SS/LE...
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Sempraseverus In reply to rouquinamour [2011-07-25 21:27:34 +0000 UTC]
I have no use for that Potter woman ... the film really did set that in concrete for me ...
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Aebtissin [2011-07-25 15:31:17 +0000 UTC]
YES! Who needs Lily when you can have Miss Granger!?
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Sempraseverus In reply to Aebtissin [2011-07-25 15:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah ... I know ... It's like I have said many times over ...
'Lily married the other guy ... forget about it Severus ...'
I like the fuzzy little know it all, untainted Granger ...
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droxy [2011-07-25 15:13:38 +0000 UTC]
Lily? What Lily? Love their outfits. You write nice angst m'dear.
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Sempraseverus In reply to droxy [2011-07-25 15:26:14 +0000 UTC]
I just was getting choked with all the lily overload ... had to wash it away with something off the charts ...
The angst meter is peaking today, and I've got an itchy pencil ... hee hee hee ...
when devising costumes for Severus you are always in my thoughts ...
Thanx for the comment sweetie ...
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MimiManderly [2011-07-25 15:11:48 +0000 UTC]
I like the outfit! He looks like a RockStar!
Say... I'm having problems getting into LJ. You having any problems with it?
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Sempraseverus In reply to MimiManderly [2011-07-25 15:21:19 +0000 UTC]
I was watching Elizabeth last night, Severus would be Walsingham's Man ... Walsingham was pure mechanizm ... of course they did give him the hollywood treatment ... none the less - He was pure AwesomeSauce ... I love that period of history ... *sigh*
GeofreyRush did him justice too ...
I wanted to put Severus in Elizabethan Garb ... He is my paperDollMuse ... giggle ...
LiveJournal is spazingOut ... I hope they get it back onLine ... I tried several different ways ... nothing is working ... boo hoo ...
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MimiManderly In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-25 15:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, Teddy had trouble posting last night, too. I just wanted to make sure it wasn't just me having problems. I hope they get it sorted out soon; I finished The Hanged Man and want to post it... plus there is Teddy's birthday drawing...
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Sempraseverus In reply to MimiManderly [2011-07-25 15:36:42 +0000 UTC]
OOoooOOOoooOOoooo ... I can't wait for to see each of them ... Hee hee hee ... Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Kitty-the-Shadow In reply to Sempraseverus [2011-07-25 15:22:04 +0000 UTC]
Very detailed writing
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Sempraseverus In reply to Kitty-the-Shadow [2011-07-25 15:27:43 +0000 UTC]
It took much coffee to compose ... giggle ...
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