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Published: 2004-04-22 19:53:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 7516; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Hmm.... I was just thinking a few days ago about introductions and the word hello and such. It's such a versatile word. So many things that go on in life all start out with the word hello.... So yeah. I wrote about it.Related content
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Great Idea for a poem! You seemed to have no trouble basing an entire poem on one main word... And such a life altering word it is... Great Job!
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I like the different angles you took to express this point. Good job!!!
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Hello...I would have never have thought about writing a poem focused on that word. You are very correct though, as hello can begin many things, from hate to love; hello starts it all. You are a very observent person to pick up on all that. I did like the descriptions in your piece. I do feel however that a bit of puncuation would have helped make things a bit clearer when the poem was read. However, your diction was great!
Just opinions....
Greg
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