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Where are the flowers going?When they float through the trees and drift through the grass
beautiful; watch them
White as snow and red as blood
beautiful
Across the skies they melt away
And leave me stranded here.
My hand reaches out
after the petals gone
but alas, they are too far away.
No, one blossom
One blossom remains
beautiful; painted with the colors of
a thousand passioned hearts
I picked it up and held it tight
but alas, it tore from my hand
and left me gray.
When I next see those flowers
when they return
I will ask them
Where are you going?
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Comments: 8
fallenangelic [2004-11-10 08:02:05 +0000 UTC]
where do they go indeed, and why must they leave. very insightful and worded well ^_^
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cinemastrgegirl [2004-11-06 01:11:41 +0000 UTC]
i like the way it is written it feels like im there. makes me wanna be there looking at the flowers.
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purplesinger [2004-11-04 22:24:42 +0000 UTC]
I'm going with what DarkStar-Abyss said. You're my age, and yet you write better than (dare I say it) Master Poe himself!! DAMN YOU FOR BEING SO GOOD!!!!!!!!
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DarkStar-Abyss [2004-11-04 11:41:01 +0000 UTC]
You write with such passion and beauty it seriosuly is hard to tell your 13 I mean your fantastic! This is my favorite piece yet its so soft and dreamy.
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