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Evolution Vs. CreationHave you ever wondered about your origins or how the universe came to be? There
are various explanations for this, both religious and factual. Some people say we will never
know. My belief, however, is that the world came to be by way of evolution instead of a
higher being. There are far too many contradictions in the religions of the world and too
many unexplained questions that lead to skeptical minds. Only one religion or non-religion
can hold the complete truth.
Possibly one of the most classic inquiries is "Where did the first organism come
from?" The general debate from religious peoples is that the universe was formed by a
creator. He, she, it, or multiple figures were there before the first atom was made. Their
existence is not to be questioned. Requests to God for a helping hand are called prayers
in the Catholic religion. Sometimes these wishes are granted. A woman dying of cancer
will suddenly be cured. Then come the long, detailed holy books such as the Bible and the
Koran. Catholics and Muslims would argue that their age (over thousands of years old)
makes them realistic. What about the supposed connections between priests and God?
Church-goers proclaim that the fierce energy behind gospel songs is from God himself.
Others have visions or dreams in which the spirit of this being comes to them, usually to give
advice. Two alternate worlds exist in the Catholic religion- a Heaven and a Hell. If you have
been a good person throughout your life, your death will be nothing to fear. Your spirit, an
invisible image of yourself, will detach from your body and be entered into a peaceful place
for the remainder of time. Many people believe that they can contact their deceased
ancestors.
If you consider for just a moment how fictional creation is, then maybe you could look
at it in a different light. How could a creature neither man nor animal, not made of flesh or
fur appear out of nowhere to create a universe? Every living thing has spawned from another,
and there are no proven accounts of immortality. These elements are used in science-fiction
stories. Nobody has ever had the brain capacity, unique power, or skill to do the things
that religious figures have done. "Then Moses stretched out his hand over the sea, and all that
night the Lord drove the sea back with a strong east wind and turned it into dry land. The
waters were divided, and the Israelites went through the sea on dry ground with a wall of
water on their right and on their left." (Exodus 14:21-22) This is an example of inhuman
strength. How could it have been possible? There are no photographs of God, but in the
pictures depicting him we see the image of a man. The Bible could be the works of a very
creative mind. Other worlds, compassion, morals, life lessons, governing, and comic-book
like characters - the perfect theme for a story...and the perfect theme for life.
Charles Darwin was the first man to put the theory of evolution into effect, although
the idea had been proposed before his birth. It was in the Galapagos Islands that he began
to understand what caused evolution. Each island had a slightly different species of bird,
each adapting to its environment. For example, there were 13 varying species of finches on
the islands, each with a different kind of beak. Darwin concluded that over time all species
are modified slightly for their survival. The individuals of a species that had a variation had
the advantage of staying alive long enough to reproduce. Their genes were passed onto
the next generation. Those genes became more popular, and thus the population evolved.
Darwin called this "descent with modification." I believe, therefore, that man has descended
from the gorilla and chimpanzee populations. Our skulls and our limbs are very much alike.
Besides sharing the same anatomic structure and thought patterns, we have many indentical
blood proteins and biochemical characteristics. The earliest apes arrived 25 million years
ago - derived from fossil evidence - giving them adequate time to be modified. Some of
the earliest humans, like the famous Lucy, resembled gorillas. Certain body parts such as
their teeth, however, had dulled down. This signifies less agression between the species
- a start to a bright society. The question "Where did the first organisms come from?" can
be easily explained through a scientist's eyes. Around 10 to 20 billion years ago, a cosmic
explosion pushed matter in all different directions, creating the universe. (It used to be
concentrated into a small area.) Since the Big Bang, the universe has been continuing to
expand...proven by the red shift in nebulas. From then on, atoms grouped together to
form elements, and eventually uni-cellular organisms were formed.
All creatures are born, live their lives (no matter how short it may be), and then die.
Their bodies are returned to the soil, so that decomposers can form nutrients. One hundred
years later, you'll still find remnants of bodies six feet beneath the ground. So how can it
be that they've gone to Heaven or Hell? Your heart comes to a halt and you stop functioning.
Soon there is just darkness. There is nothing. There is no solid proof such as photographs of
the soul leaving the body at death. I believe that your soul is your brain and your unique
genes - they make you who you are, but not invincible. Prayers are merely hopes for
something better. It would make sense that fifty percent of the time, if you pray for cures
or happiness, that they would happen. If you prayed for a million dollars, (even though that
would be considered 'being greedy') what are the chances you'd actually receive it? One in a
million. God is a crutch. People want to believe that there is something better for them out
there. The idea of death, of a blank world...of rotting- none of it is pleasant or
comprehensible. Wouldn't you much rather have this so called Heaven awaiting you? I
would, but I want the truth. You should be your conscience, rather then a being that might
not even exist. Strive to be successful and above all, be a good person. There don't need
to be set rules for this. 'Sinners' will have the same fate, but won't have golden hearts. People
pray to God, but they are actually consulting themselves. When they think that God has
acknowledged their wishes, they start moving towards them on their own, unknowingly.
This is the power of 'prayer'. Self-motivation. Where was God during the Holocaust, the
Depression, and 9/11? According to the Ten Commandents, "Thou shall not kill." This is
a contradiction. If God had the power to make things right- to plan our futures- then He
would stop the suffering. All this world really needs is some harmony.
One of the strongest human emotions is fear. Could this have driven us to create
religions? We are so scared to die that we create alternate endings. Creation verses evolution
will always be an argued topic, merely because of this emotion.
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Comments: 2
sharpenednails [2004-11-11 23:52:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. (: The teacher's a Christian so I think that affected the comments and grade some, unfortunately. He said the ending was weak and the second paragraph didn't have good reasons - but then at the end he said it did. o_o Very confusing, very critical. Ah well.
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Lucky9842 [2004-11-02 02:56:53 +0000 UTC]
You know, for the most part, I definitely agree with your view on things. I really believe that religion is something that man created in hopes that they wouldn't have to think of just nothing after death. I don't believe that there's necessarily an all-knowing, all mighty, all-powerful 'higher being.' I mean, sure... there are probably beings out there who are stronger than us... who are composed differently. Of energy or something, maybe. Sentient beings who can manipulate things beyond human comprehension... but if there -are- such beings, then they would have to make mistakes too as far as I'm concerned. I don't believe in perfection. It's an impossibility.
And that age-old question: where did the Universe itself come from? Where did the materials it's made out of come from? I think that's something beyond human comprehension as well. They do say we only use ten or tweny percent of our brains. Wonder what would happen if we learned to use all of it?
Bah, nonetheless, I think this is a well thought-out essay. Good job with writing it. And while I'm writing here, I'd also like to say that I really enjoyed the pictures you took for your Holocaust project. Great work, Jess.
You rawk.
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