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Okay, this started as a boredom comic of what if, because Billy created a TimeBomb in gmod according to this pic shoobaqueen.deviantart.com/art… so this is a silly comic of TimeBomb wandering through gmod trying to find Fallout, and he accidentally stumbles into a game of MURDER (dadadada, laaa). THe previous three pages of this were really rough drafty and pencily and awful, but then I started actually having fun with this, so I'm now drawing it straight from the pen, because for some reason I do better that way. I'm copy and pasting this description, because lazy.

Now, I wanted to try this;
_Billy was sprinting for his life from Jimmy Casket, knife clutched desperately in his hand.

_"Give me my knife, Billy," Casket giggled, sounding only inches from Billy's face.

_"No!" Billy wailed, "I'm the murderer!"

_"Face it, Billy," Jimmy seethed, leaping at him, "you don't have the guts to be the murderer," Billy yelped as Casket tackled him to the ground. "You don't have a secret," Jimmy was pushing down on Billy's head, pressing it against the pavement, Billy's arm pinned down painfully by Jimmy's knee. "You don't even know how to use this knife, do you?" Jimmy laughed, trying to pull the knife out of Billy's grip.

_Above them, on the roof of a building, Maddie, Aimee, and TimeBomb watched with concern.

_"Billy!" Maddie cried, on the verge of tears.

_"Isn't zat against the rules?" Aimee wondered.

_What would Cywren do? TimeBomb thought. She would probably shoot the person trying to kill people. TimeBomb straightened and cocked a large laser rifle, alarming Aimee and Maddie.

_"Wait! Don't shoot!" Maddie cried, "you could hit Billy!"

_Down below, Jimmy Casket was standing on Billy, trying to yank the knife out of his fist. One of Caskets shoes was in Billy's stomach, the other was on his head. "GIVE ME THE KNIFE!" Casket screeched. "LET GO ALREADY!!!"

_"No!" Billy squealed.

_There was a flash of red and a zapping sound, and Casket sprawled off of Billy and onto the street. His red eyes looked upward, filled with hatred, his hoodie scorched. "YOU AGAIN?!" He screamed at the figure of TimeBomb on top of the building, gun smoking in his hand. "Are you ACTUALLY the guy with the gun this time?" Casket demanded, getting to his feet, "Or did you just cheat-" Casket froze, his eyes widened. "Wait.' He said, fingering something cold and metal. "What's this in my pocket?"

What do you guys think of that? Should I do it with other pages, or is it irksome?

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Description
Okay, this started as a boredom comic of what if, because Billy created a TimeBomb in gmod according to this pic shoobaqueen.deviantart.com/art… so this is a silly comic of TimeBomb wandering through gmod trying to find Fallout, and he accidentally stumbles into a game of MURDER (dadadada, laaa). THe previous three pages of this were really rough drafty and pencily and awful, but then I started actually having fun with this, so I'm now drawing it straight from the pen, because for some reason I do better that way. I'm copy and pasting this description, because lazy.

Now, I wanted to try this;
_Billy was sprinting for his life from Jimmy Casket, knife clutched desperately in his hand.

_"Give me my knife, Billy," Casket giggled, sounding only inches from Billy's face.

_"No!" Billy wailed, "I'm the murderer!"

_"Face it, Billy," Jimmy seethed, leaping at him, "you don't have the guts to be the murderer," Billy yelped as Casket tackled him to the ground. "You don't have a secret," Jimmy was pushing down on Billy's head, pressing it against the pavement, Billy's arm pinned down painfully by Jimmy's knee. "You don't even know how to use this knife, do you?" Jimmy laughed, trying to pull the knife out of Billy's grip.

_Above them, on the roof of a building, Maddie, Aimee, and TimeBomb watched with concern.

_"Billy!" Maddie cried, on the verge of tears.

_"Isn't zat against the rules?" Aimee wondered.

_What would Cywren do? TimeBomb thought. She would probably shoot the person trying to kill people. TimeBomb straightened and cocked a large laser rifle, alarming Aimee and Maddie.

_"Wait! Don't shoot!" Maddie cried, "you could hit Billy!"

_Down below, Jimmy Casket was standing on Billy, trying to yank the knife out of his fist. One of Caskets shoes was in Billy's stomach, the other was on his head. "GIVE ME THE KNIFE!" Casket screeched. "LET GO ALREADY!!!"

_"No!" Billy squealed.

_There was a flash of red and a zapping sound, and Casket sprawled off of Billy and onto the street. His red eyes looked upward, filled with hatred, his hoodie scorched. "YOU AGAIN?!" He screamed at the figure of TimeBomb on top of the building, gun smoking in his hand. "Are you ACTUALLY the guy with the gun this time?" Casket demanded, getting to his feet, "Or did you just cheat-" Casket froze, his eyes widened. "Wait.' He said, fingering something cold and metal. "What's this in my pocket?"

What do you guys think of that? Should I do it with other pages, or is it irksome?

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