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SieTalon — Neutral's Outline

Published: 2006-12-23 00:56:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 222; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Neutral, on the outside; Mature, a leader, loyal, faithful, smart, battle-hardy, outgoing, witty, a mouse turn to when there's trouble.

On the inside; depression, melancholy.

All in all, he's like Will Smith. Sans the extremeeee cool.

But still cool.

I like him .

Summary:

Something has always been amiss inside the mind of Neutral, but it rarely made an appearance. Neutral appears to be a normal, an often excelling individual, who easily inspires courage in others. He is a natural leader, easily promoted to Captain in the Martian army a year after joining. He can dive into battle, guns blazing, adrenaline pumping, but has enough sense to know when to pull back and how command troops. He is scientifically inclined, socially adept, and compassionate.

Despite the superman-esq life he led, the darker side of his personality, a constant depression exacerbated by the death of his older sister when he was a teen, drove him to attempt suicide. The young Neutral drove out to a deserted patch of Martian sand and had his hand on the trigger when he heard cursing. Instead of pulling the trigger, he conveniently stopped an old man, a scientist, from blowing himself up. The old man stubbornly denied he had been in any danger but in a sweeping gesture of "gratitude" employed Neutral to help him with experiments. The old man “hired” the teenage Neutral and worked the young Martian, giving him something else to focus on. The old man would eventually introduce Neutral to his future wife, the old man’s niece, Villa .

The love of his family, and friends beat back Neutrals depression and gave him greater focus. His life was steady in those early years, as much as could be expected in a interplanetary war. And that’s how Neutrals life went on, until the war made it’s way to his home. A surgical attack intended to take him out, and a few other higher ranking officials in the army, killed his pregnant wife and daughter, leaving him, the old man, and one other official alive. The old man saved Neutral from the rubble and brought him back to army base where Neutral wandered, mindlessly, for months. Then one day, to the surprise of all who knew him, Neutral seemed to brighten and resumed his normal duties like the attack had never happened. Knowing that he was still going through the grieving process, the soldiers and friends left Neutral alone. One late and dark night, Neutral stole his way from the camp and like many years before, found a desolate spot in the desert. Aiming a pistol to his breast, wondering which star his wife and daughter were waiting by for him, he began to squeeze the trigger. A woman’s scream ripped through the dunes halting his finger, and Neutral was suspended between wanting to end it all and realizing someone needed his help.

In one loud and broken scream of frustration and missed chances, Neutral jumped on his bike and what he found was a human girl being attacked by one of the Martian enemies a ratatonian. Neutral killed the rat, using the pistol that was meant to end his own life, and was introduced to a torn, bloody, and crying girl.

The savior of mars.

And his.
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