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Published: 2019-07-29 22:04:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1007; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Ah just something I thought would be cool, wanted to draw her again lol, hope you guys like her ^^ (Yes, I gave her a zebra tail lol)Related content
Comments: 4
Ohayo! I am here in behalf of Well, gotta say, another week for another feedback review.
Just before I proceed, I'm into lots of fanservice, curvy, sexy and busty, those 3 words what represent it. It is what makes a lady very attractive and compelling.
OK, time for the review.
Lucy sure has a nice looking body. U got the proportions right for a curvaceous bombshell.
Liked the bikini design. Simple but nice pattern and color of choice. Though the text on the sports bra would need some work (The angle and the scaling of each of the letters), though another problem is the angle of the breasts and the sports bra. It is implied that with that perspective, the left strap of her sports bra is longer than her right. And I would consider trying to practice regarding angles of clothes depending on the perspective of the artwork.
The sexy posture looks great, I give it a two thumbs up. Sure qualifies for a beach pin-up!
Third. Background looks kinda stale. I mean I know it's a beach theme but it lacks some glamour, like a brighter sun or some sparkles on the ocean (resulting from the reflection from the sunlight) just to make it look lively. Even the kite wouldn't be enough. I suggest u try putting some mountains or some birds in the BG just to give the background some glamour.
Nonetheless, u still sport a great pin-up artwork. Ur art style is refined by character. All well done, keep it up. I hope my advice can help u excel ur art skills in the future, my friend.
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This is super pretty. I am actually dying for the way you colored her skin. It is flawless. The shading and the highlights look so professional and glossy. Its very appealing to look at. You did an outstanding job. It's no surprise that I love a dummy thicc women. Her shape is awesome sauce, the sexiness really came through on this one and I'm living for it. Her swimsuit came out pretty amazing, it hugs her body very nicely. It looks like its really on her.
Most of my problems are anatomical. For example her shoulder looks kind of off and bent strangely. If its going all the way up, the shoulder should be tucked behind her face not a few inches away from it. Her head looks very tiny in comparison to her body, it kind of throws the image out of wack. It doesn't need to be humongous, but proportional. The hand stretching toward us doesn't look like its, well, stretching. I looks like a very very big hand attached to a very tiny forearm. I think you could have shrunk it a bit and made the forearm not going off to the side but rather coming toward the camera as well, which is actually very hard to do which is why I don't really do it in my work, so I guess I have no room. While her skin is glossy, she doesn't actually look wet as if she's been in the water, she looks oiled up rather than drenched. Even if she hasn't gone under, her legs should be just a little wet toward the bottom at least.
Other than that, I think you did a phenomenal job. Defiantly work on that anatomy, and I'm sure you'll do amazing things.
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