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smoshgoshjosh — Fur Studies [Part 2]
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Published: 2016-10-28 02:13:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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Am I getting better? What do I need to improve? Comment below please! ^-^Character and Art © 2016 smoshgoshjosh
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I think you're doing great so far. In this picture in particular, you've got your highlights down pretty well, but you've still got to work on shading a bit, since I'm not sure you attempted to do it or not in this picture. The different patches of fur, especially your head fluff area, cause me to have some difficulty distinguishing the different 'strands' (if that's what you happen to call them) which could be differentiated by a slightly darker color where the light wouldn't be hitting it.
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This looks really good! I'd say perhaps work on shading and highlighting? Here's some tutorials that might help you! Also try making the lineart stand out a bit more. But you're getting there! This is already a huge improvement.
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RedtheKitsune and SilkenWindhound are right. However I'm not saying it's bad.
It's definitely better than ones from past.
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Hmm, maybe give the fur more texture? Right now most of it just looks flat/completely smooth. Obviously this wolf is fluffy, based on the way you drew the tail/chest fur etc., and therefore wouldn't have super short flat fur. So I think giving the fur more depth and texture would help.
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I believe you should work a bit more on blending and shading. If you have a setting for transparency of the pen, turning down the opaqueness could help while shading. Your lines are still clean as ever though!
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