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Published: 2001-12-05 15:05:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1483; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 220
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StarDustNIGHTon wings of unseen glass birds
a taste of stardust forced upon their delicate brow
eyes tired of the journey to
forever and
gossamer crystal entrails
taut with overtasking
we drift slowly along this stream
in endless night
and the colours!
from somewhere far above
(below?)
the stars sing praises and
align with the planets in tribute to their Creator
as their reflections dance in the aether all around,
below, within
throughout we course towards the grey of dawn
or the alternative, if such a thing does not exist
and sing songs of quiet wonderment
searching
for a way back home
:// © 2001 J. Michael Renaud
Comments: 3
manadrake [2001-12-08 03:17:28 +0000 UTC]
Wonderfully vivd...I live my entire life in a dreamlike state..heh..so I felt right at home.
You know what I found most pleasing about this poem...I learned a new spelling...I had no idea that "aether" was a variant spelling of "ether"...(call me stupid heh)..so I looked it up. That is so much more "poetic" than my normal spelling..Thanks.
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~MD~ https://manadrake.deviantart.com/
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redred [2001-12-06 13:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Its a sweet poem man
See My site okay?
http://www.twilighthush.com/cckg
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