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LittleFawns [2017-06-29 17:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! 

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SotoArts [2017-06-29 14:59:15 +0000 UTC]

Hello I'm from  

The pice is indeed well done, you took care of details, such as a proper shadeing, glowing lines the hud for the eye, a (almost) dynamic pose and so on. You did what you had to and you did a good job!! 
However there's important details that you left behind and others that I see you tried I work on, so let's see the ones you worked. One would be the pose, I noticed that you tried to use that awesome pose of learning back, but let me tell you, from the weist and above its stiff, not following the pose, only the legs, oh and I would have suggested to exaggerating the pose a bit for a better impression tho. 
Second , you tried to work on giving a texture to the arm, that's good, really good, but for the consistency of the image and its composition the texture as you worked it doesn't goes with the rest, you may try later with other drawing where you give texture to the general drawing and you will see what I'm talking about!
 Next thing on the list is the pants, look for clothing wrinkles tutorial. There you will see Howe the wrinkles of his pants could have looked better. Also be careful when you use certain colors as adding shine or reflections requires more attention to detail, if you use a very dark color, he light it will reflect will have a certain lighter tone of the same color and not a super shiny reflection (unless it's glass or a reflective material) .
And the last thing here is that the arrows feather need to be bigger and more worked as for little important details, they need that bit more of attention.  

Anyway you did a great job, it's  only more practice and attention to details and you will have more awesome results!! If you have questions don't hesitate to ask 

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