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Snowwire — ToH - Aud part 1
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Long first part audition is looong~ xD
I was actually done with the art before I went on the trip but I was never able to finish the speech bubbles and text. |D
Such an odd, simple way on doing comic pages for me if I compare to my comic xD But man... if I would do Atir's Story as simple as this, I bet I could get up pages so fricken fast XD
But it was fun to draw more sketchy and not try to keep it "SUPER PERFECT"
It is, however, quite hard to keep Aiden in his accurate size. =w=Well! Next part means CAMEO TIME!
And any spelling fails I did? Feel free to point it out~ oweGawd I love Nim~
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oh wow that's so kool! I love it!
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this is really amazing! its so entertaining! *u* your so good at making up stories!
but i think i found a little tiny mistake in the sentence: "The winner gets to become a apprentice of Elly, the master of magic". I think it should say "an" apprentice' instead of "a" apprentice. but its so small, i don't think anyone will notice lol. X3
though also "I never meet a polecat before" sounds a little odd to me. O.o i think it should say "I've never met a polecat before". unless that's how Nim talks or something lol. i could be wrong. ^^ just trying to help is all.
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Aww thank you very much! owo <3
Ah I see xD I thought it would be an since you say "an apple" xD
Oh! haha no, he doesn't speak like that xD I wrote those small text fast. Heh thanks for pointing it out! ^^
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O w O
Omg! You make it look so easy and fun, even though I know it takes a ton of effort and work! X3 <3
One of these days, I'm going to join up into one of these art battles of epicalness. o v o
I'm very excited to see the rest of it, and how you do in the competition!!
Good luck on it, Snowwire!! C:
Also....Omg! Nim! Look at 'em! Look at 'em! O W O -stares-
Tehehe. I love the characters you have for this competition too. Very nice~
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Fffff yes you totally should try joining one sometime
Thank you very much Doodle! ;D
Haha he's the winner in cuteness~ >w<
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Dude, I so should!! C: Sometime. When I have time....
I might actually have time by the end of this month though! Wooo! XD
And you're very welcome, Snow! ;D
Yes, he is!! X3
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Lol. Yeah, very true. XD
Plus, I think if I tried to join an OCT anytime soon it'd kill me
because I haven't exactly been too-too active with my drawings. x__x ;;
I need to get on that. XD;;
^ ^ ;;
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Daaw xD
yes you need to get on that :I xDD
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I totally love this. Nim and his singing is great balance to Aiden and his serious-ity : D
Aaaaah I just love the flow and the dialogue in this page.
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Haha I thought it was needed 8D
Thank you very much! ;3
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X'D It's great~
Your welcome!~
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so far, to me, this is unbelieavably original.
i love that the main character isnt a canine, i love that the "lady" is a spiritual deer..or moreof, what is it? the back droops too low to be a deer, in my opinion. so it could be something else.
and how that antler thing forms into that..what is it? xD
and the wing idea. just too beatiful~
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Well Avi is just the "spirit" of the forest and when showing herself she takes on a form similar to a deer, yet not completly
And Nim is just uhh... "a part of Avi" yet still with his own mind of sort xD Or perhaps I should more say, Nim is something Avi created.
But thank you very much for the kind words! ;D
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i think..i understand that. xD
but youre welcome dear.<3
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GLOWING CYAN DEER FTW 8D
Sorry, had to be said.
Totally loving the artwork and panel flow. The white time-lapse panels are fabulous. <3
Oh Aiden you silly goose er... polecat.
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TOTALLY C8
Thank you very much ^^ <3
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This is so... FLIPPEN CUTE! xD <33
Ohh Nim~ <3
I just want to hug him, cause he's just so adorable! ;u;
Aiden's such a loyal person!
I'm sure he won't disappoint his lady~ c;
Your doing a wonderful job Snowcream on your backgrounds and the poses are neat too~ ;D
I love your comicssss~ ;u;
I'm sure your audition will be a 100% percent success! Cx
Wonderful job Snow!
I can't wait to see more! ;3
Are the cameo's for the people in that group Snow? 0w0 *is curious*
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Daaaw~ >w<
Yes I know right? ;w; I totally would want a pet like Nim~ 8D
He is, he is~ xD almost stubborn loyal XD
Thank you very much Sym darling~ x3
Ah yes, it is. xP The cameo's will be characters that are also auditioning for the tournament ;D
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Hehe!~ x3 <3333
LOL totally! ;o;
Hehe totally stubborn loyal type!~ xD
No problem meh Snowcream~ Cx
Cool~ ;D I can't wait to see some other characters then!~ ~
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I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THIS IS
But it's art from you so I HAD to read it and I LOVE IT AKDHD <3
I lvoe the messiness of it 'CAUSE PERFECT CAN GET ANNOYING SOMETIMES
Anyway, those characters are too cute and I want to nom hug them
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Haha it's an audition for a orginal character tournament (OCT). ;3
But thank you VERY MUCH DEAR ;D <3
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I love this!
Its awesome... Nim is soo cute!!!!!!
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You're welcome^^
Oh, and btw, my fursona/persona's named Elly XD A funny coincidence XD
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Haha XD that's just awesome XD
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This rocks! I really like the sketchy style you're using and the story so far. Captain Planet much?
Near the bottom, shouldn't "forget the ticket" be "forgot"? And I'm curious as to why some panels are blank.
But overall, I'm really enjoying this.
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Thank you very much ^^ Don't know what Captain Planet is |D
Ah well they are sorta suppose to be uhmm..."time-lapse" or what the hell I should call them. You know, skipping forward a bit in the story to skip un-needed parts.
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It was a 90s cartoon show about a superhero fighting for the environment.
Ah, okay. Thank you for explaining.
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Ah, I guess they never showed that show in Sweden~
No problem.
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I think hes gonna end up shoving Nim in a trash can somewhere XD lol
awsome page! I love your art style X3 now I'm really curious, how does he get the ticket!? I guess will see
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Haha yes I can really see him doing that XD
It will actually not be that special xD
Thank you ^^
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Aww it's all so cute, but the pollution piece is sad. ;C
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I love everything about this comic
Good luck~
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