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Published: 2003-06-13 02:41:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 12583237; Favourites: -1023410176; Downloads: 2
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You used to ask me to smile when I was cryingYou were always there when I needed you the most
And even though we’ve grown apart of late
The distance can’t change how I feel about you
Please stop crying and show the world your smile
Your eyes are more beautiful when they aren’t in tears
Please be happy, it’s all I want
I’m sorry for what I’ve done
Please forgive me
Please be happy
I don’t care about anything else
Tears should not hide a smile so beautiful
I care so much for you
And even though my words aren’t worth much
Please be happy
Please smile
I’d rather be without you than see you in tears
I care about you
Please smile
I want to be your friend
I still have those feelings but I will put them aside
I’d rather be your friend than keep this awkwardness.
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Comments: 2
lollie [2003-06-13 02:55:04 +0000 UTC]
This is a great poem sola-scriptura i think it is awesome writing, im no good at critique either but dont you ever say you suck at poetry cause this proved that theory WRONG keep it up
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unheard-voice [2003-06-13 02:46:51 +0000 UTC]
nicely done, a very good message to this, one i can relate to. keep up the writing.
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