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Published: 2003-06-02 03:28:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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As I wallow through this filthAll I can see is my selfish desire
All I want to do is run away
But whenever I start to run the filth holds me in place
I have been trapped in my filth
As long as I can remember
Whenever I fight it
I end up on my face
I canβt seem to beat it
Will this struggle never end
I feel like giving up
Like falling over, and to start to rot
But I will stay strong, it is my on;y hope
My only hope in this filthy flesh
This filthy flesh that is my curse.
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Comments: 2
unheard-voice [2003-06-02 03:37:46 +0000 UTC]
very well done. i like the idea of this alot, and you write it very well. my only suggestion (and its just my humble opinion) would be to try and use other words for filth. find some synonms. but i like it alot. great work.
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lilitheternity [2003-06-02 03:30:46 +0000 UTC]
this is very well written, and very sad... but i like it...
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