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Published: 2003-05-27 05:47:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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So confusedNot sure how to act
Akward silence always kills me
Can\'t seem to survive this oncoming onslaught
Can\'t seem to get my life right
Will I be ready for the ragnarok
Or will I be devoured by my own sin
What should I do
To avoid the jaws of Fenrir
Please come down and help me
I am dying inside
I can\'t seem to hack it anymore
All I can do is give up
And let the wind blow against my face
Please come and help me
Take my hand
Carry me to a better place
Save me from myself
Free me from my flesh
And stop me from my ponderance.
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Comments: 2
showna [2003-05-27 11:37:21 +0000 UTC]
Akward silence always kills me... good line. I like the whole mythology theme - I didn't know what a few of the references were about but it didn't ruin in the poem. The bottom few lines reminded me of that song by stabbing westward "Save Youself"" I think it was called.
If your friend can't take a negative comment, he/she shouldn't be here. And you should mind your own business.
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unheard-voice [2003-05-27 07:11:39 +0000 UTC]
hey, i dont know what your refering to some of the time, but i feel the jist of this poem, i really like it. great writing. keep it comin,
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