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sombrero — a stack of spoons
Published: 2001-10-08 23:27:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 30
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Description
a stack of spoonsfits tightly together
like we once did
knock them to the floor
as you no longer need me
I do not need them
food restores my life
when that's the last thing I want
what I need is you
enough with tears
can't stand the endless pain
move on to knives
Comments: 2
very well written, i can feel the pain that you are feeling
great work
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-=Blender13=-
special to me:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=174768
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this is a lot different than a haiku, i enjoy this, its a lot more original in form. very well done here. the silverware refrences are an interesting thing. as the tick would say:
SPOOON!!!!
Evan aka chymera
making the most of nothing in the way of talent
a vain or foolish fancy
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