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Published: 2004-03-10 20:34:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 19; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description I have no IDEA what subcategory to put my poems into... bleh.
Anyhow, this is either the first or second poem I wrote. Yayness...
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phoenixtx [2004-03-10 20:38:30 +0000 UTC]

the repetition is good... but all the semi-colons really distract from the poem itself.

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