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tremx [2003-04-28 08:03:08 +0000 UTC]

For your pixel first this is great, you even have the shadow coming down from the building...awesome work

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littlereddevil [2003-04-27 15:31:03 +0000 UTC]

First of all great first attempt, I can see you really put effort into this!
All I want to add is that the windows on the side of the building look smaller than the ones on the front and the grass would look great with a little darker green added to it. Keep it up and Id like to see more of your pixel work!

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banxter [2003-04-27 14:50:54 +0000 UTC]

That's an excellent first try! I love it!
You did a good job with the shaddowing and all that, and the colors, and the building etc. A few tips are...

On the lines on buildings and stuff, try to reduce the black lines. Instead replace them with colored lines that match the building. So let's say the building is red, use a lighter, or darker color of the same shade of red, to color the inside lines of the building.
As ~proxide said, the lights aren't usually on during the day, so you could make them a different color.. But that's a minor.
Try to use an isometric angle for your pixelart (2x2 pixels)
If you want to enhance your pixel scenes, add people, cars, bushes, anything that could take up more space, and make the scene more interesting!

Otherwise, this is great!
Nice work!

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proxide [2003-04-27 14:20:35 +0000 UTC]

cool pixelwork, im not much into it tough...
the lamps are too light, as it is day, they should be off.

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