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Published: 2002-04-10 08:52:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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The moment is goneand just a blur now.
The words sped by
and I cant figure how
they got away from me.
Another chance lost
and few left to come.
Few and far between
I need to find one,
make it what it should be.
I need constant contact
to wear away the wall
standing against conversation,
trapping all my words.
This lack of free thought
constricting every conversation,
and inflicting undue stress
is prime for a breakthrough.
A collapse of brick and mortar
resulting in a rush
of the smallest conversation
holding the highest meaning.
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Comments: 2
khoury [2002-05-12 00:11:57 +0000 UTC]
the beginning of that comment was for the first one. The second one is good but 2 different flows together throws me off. You know, now that I've read the first one outloud it does seem a lot better. Bah what the hell do i know?
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I listened to NSYNC when they were underground.
- sum random t-shirt
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khoury [2002-05-12 00:08:38 +0000 UTC]
It flows well in the begining but seems to drift a bit starting in the middle. The topic is steady but the word flow is a bit off. By the way, who said you could invert that graphic I gave you. Uhh anyway it looks like shit dude so I'm gonna fix it up for you if I can find the original. I guess I'll invert it for you along with the size fix. Upstart poets thinking they can become graphicizers in one day...
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I listened to NSYNC when they were underground.
- sum random t-shirt
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