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Published: 2002-01-13 06:26:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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Questions are ripe,they are the fruit of life,
but the answers aren't always
the reality.
The ignorance wont last,
it all comes down so fast
and you see how the world weighs
its hypocrisy.
Explanations aren't included,
how it is
is how it came.
The truth is such a tricky game.
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Comments: 1
I *love* the thought in this one!! I like things that make me think.
Although I feel like you fall into an almost unwilling and typical rhythm at a few points here - like "The ignorance won't last,/ it all comes down so fast" feels, not exactly forced, but unnatural for this poem. The poem feels like it should be "beyond" (for a severe lack of a better word (sorry )) such a rhythm.
Overall, another really nice poem - good job!
-muse-
be well
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