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Published: 2012-05-15 19:03:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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And now it officially begins. My first comic entry....this is one giant experiment. The last time I did a story telling comic was five years ago and a great shame for myself.Speaking of experiment, the black and white pencil is flashbacks. They tend to be jumbled.
First: HERE
Second: [link]
Third: [link]
Fourth: [link]
Fifth: [link]
Sixth: [link]
Team Jet: [link]
Shiv, Cindi, Maple, and Winston were created for and belong to *crayon-chewer , *michael2021 , and ~CubeMelon
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oh, really loving the marker style here and how you do the font bubbles to match their primary typing. and cool how you did the flashback in a different medium with pencils to make it clearly a flashback XD
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That looks nice~
It's a great idea to color the pokemon and do the backgrounds with fineliners for example~
good luck with the rest~
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Not bad. But I would suggest putting an outline around the text bubbles
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Ok.
Anything else I can work on?
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Hmm...
Panel two is a bit hard to see what's going on. I know what you were aiming for, but maybe darken the lines next time or draw it in a though bubble? I think smudging the pencil "shadings" with your finger or something else will also make it look smoother and nicer.
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Hmm, yeah, I'll work on that. Thanks.
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