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Sprog — Blown Off No.19
Published: 2003-09-17 20:56:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description Blown Off

Blown off,
Pushed away,
Released and forced alone,
So alone…

But why?
I care, I love.
Oh… I am huh?
Well you see what happens,
When you’re alone.

I’ll just go now,
I’m obviously not worth it,
Its so visible you don’t care,
You do, you say?

Yea, and I’m going to fall for it,
Grab hold of you,
Until, yet again, you don’t need me.

So don’t bother blowing me off,
I’ll just go,
There’s no point in staying.
You’ve destroyed us.
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Comments: 3

themonosandal [2003-10-03 19:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Ouch! Why did you have to stab so near my heart?
T{ouch!}ing, very nice. No, I think it's powerful enough to hold the balance, in the 4. stanza, and, anyway, you don't recite those like classical or elizabethian poems, do you? I tried this one slowly, monologue-like, and it was quite ok, I think...

[My appreciation of your work rises with my "knowledge" or... "experience" of it... wow! that's impressing! Congries! (short for [cum+gratia=]congratulation{s})

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narnia4ever [2003-09-18 13:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Ehm, is this one about me?

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psychicdrone [2003-09-18 05:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice, depressing but nice... except I think you need another line in the 4th stanza to balance it but then it's your poem ^^

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