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Sprog — Heartbroken No.22
Published: 2003-09-18 20:30:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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Description Heartbroken

That day I met you,
It was so good,
We skated around,
Being so happy,
And we fell in love.

Then we split up,
Broke away,
And I felt so shit.
But that’s ok,
I’d get over it…

But here I am,
Still, alone and gutted,
With renewed love,
For something I cannot have,
That sacred present.

You felt so good,
I was so happy,
And so were you,
I could see it in your eyes,
Those bright eyes…

And when we split,
Its destroyed me,
So much so,
I wasn’t me,
I was someone else.

Someone with a terminal illness,
Called “Heartbroken,”
And I was their worst case.
Here I am, long while later,
Still loving you.

Still loving you,
When your loving someone else,
“In a different way,”
Its still love…
And I’m still in it.

So what is he?
Is he better?
“No” you say,
So why are you with him?
Because he’s nice.

Your worth more than nice,
He doesn’t know how lucky he is,
No one knows,
Except me,
Because its only me.

Its only me…
Who knows you,
It was only you,
That I wanted,
And I lost it.

You know what was amazing?
Our first kiss,
My first kiss ever.
And I’m so happy it was you,
So very happy.

I promised I’d remember it,
And I will,
Because that has to be,
The best thing, since sliced bread.
Now its burnt bread…

And I have to admit defeat,
That you love him,
That you like me,
And still think of me.
But its not enough.

Its never enough,
You still don’t realize,
The pain, and hurt I’ve been through.
For you.
Only, for you.
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Comments: 3

psychicdrone [2003-09-19 05:29:27 +0000 UTC]

I just felt like my heart was torn out and kicked and burned... Other people's poems never have that effect one me but this did... you have a way of writing that makes your poems go straight to my heart... beautiful... so sad...

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Red-Lipstick [2003-09-19 01:24:45 +0000 UTC]

that is something to be felt with a full fist of coal. I mean... yikes... It is straight to the point. I like that.

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brwncow [2003-09-18 20:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Just want you to know that this inspired me to write this . I actually wrote it in this comment box.. But I didn't think it fit here lol.
Good job on this one. I feel it. I wish you luck in your endeavours.

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