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Sprog — Suicidal Tendencies No.71
Published: 2004-02-08 20:23:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 154; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 14
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Description Suicidal Tendencies No. 71

I play with my life,
Like the edge of a knife,
Living so close to the slit,
Tempted to split.

Slicing open my arm,
I watch, staying calm,
That ooze flow,
And that mass on the floor grow…

Until my eyes go blind,
My mind, deciding it’s in a bind,
Closing in, the darkness,
The light becoming sparkless...

Now I’m a body,
A nobody,
Lay on the floor,
Rotting, against the door.
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Comments: 4

Morgan-Le-Fay [2004-03-01 19:19:27 +0000 UTC]

your imagery/emotive language is almost too constant.. although an amazing array of gore-ridden pictures flash in my head, pehaps a memory or a recollection.. very lovely piece.

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DragonLord5187 [2004-02-23 21:52:59 +0000 UTC]

You know... It is good but you have to think before you do something stupid bro... Just do me a favor and think.

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mxreverb [2004-02-08 21:43:20 +0000 UTC]

I like it alot.

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darkwonder [2004-02-08 21:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow thats great! I love it!

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