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Published: 2003-07-23 01:34:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 197; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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I don't want to liveyet I don't want to die.
I know not how to laugh,
and not how to cry.
As I live in this world
my sorrow does grow
yet I keep on living
as it is all I know.
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jo-kr [2003-07-23 01:43:39 +0000 UTC]
Another whimsical poem! you have a very nice style if i may so. Again, you could perhaps change the last line of the first stanza..to "nor to cry" or "nor how to cry". Just a thought! love your poems
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