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StanelyJava — My Beautiful Ballerina
Published: 2003-10-10 22:18:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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...When I was little..I'd always say. "Mommy. I'm a rina. I'm a rina mommy!" and I would dance around the house for her. In my tootoo..and toe shoes. I'm not a ballerina any more.Related content
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cliche and unbroken paragraphs make for long tedious read
originality is key, work on that and you can get away with almost anything
work away from angst
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hey, that's a beautiful poem, the feelings are right there...keep it goin java
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