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Supach — Each passing day.
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luceene-k [2016-01-03 15:41:32 +0000 UTC]

i wish you a joyful 2016.

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Supach In reply to luceene-k [2016-01-03 16:37:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much. My best wishes to you too

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luceene-k In reply to Supach [2016-01-07 21:18:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Jangirl83 In reply to ??? [2016-01-03 02:41:39 +0000 UTC]

My condolences. And Happy New Year!

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Supach In reply to Jangirl83 [2016-01-03 09:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you , I wish the same for you

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shelleypalmer [2016-01-02 20:22:23 +0000 UTC]

I like the way you started with the word sadness and ended it with the same word.  I always think it is a poignant emphasis to do this - also if it is the same sentence beginning and end - that works well too and I have seen this in others work.  I may have done it once or twice.  Ah, now you have conquered the Rictameter I am wondering if there will be more forthcoming in the New Year?

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Supach In reply to shelleypalmer [2016-01-02 22:09:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Shelly . The group "flawedliterature" hold weekly prompts and competitions and the founder knows all about different constructions of poems and can explain them really well. They are looking for more new members if you´d like to join. here´s the link flawedliterature.deviantart.co…

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shelleypalmer In reply to Supach [2016-01-03 18:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - I am actually already in it and my stories have been accepted. Maybe I will gave a go at something different in the new year.  Nice of you to let me know. 

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Supach In reply to shelleypalmer [2016-01-03 19:43:49 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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IRIS-KUPP In reply to ??? [2016-01-02 17:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Hope your not feeling sad, just your poem.
Never seen a rictameter poem before very interesting way. 

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Supach In reply to IRIS-KUPP [2016-01-02 18:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Iris, I still have my moments though they are now not as frequest. I have his photo just above my computer screen sometimes, I look up directly into his smiling eyes it´s as if he is still with me

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IRIS-KUPP In reply to Supach [2016-01-02 19:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Ha!!!  In His Smiling Eyes, now that sounds like the title to a poem.    




 

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Supach In reply to IRIS-KUPP [2016-01-02 21:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes it does a bit, doesn´t it

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MBO13thXundergroundX In reply to ??? [2016-01-02 15:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Such a great poem, very expressive, well done... 

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Supach In reply to MBO13thXundergroundX [2016-01-02 15:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and for the too

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MBO13thXundergroundX In reply to Supach [2016-01-02 16:17:52 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome... 

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