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Tacskoexe — I'm not a crazed gunman
Published: 2010-07-09 10:58:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2765; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 31
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First I wanted to make a sniper fanart, and a little sniper comic. Then I decided I put them together, and I think it doesn't look too weird.This time I didn't use any blum on the shadows. I tought this would fitt better with the strong outline, and I prety much like it. What's your opinion?
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I'm not sure if she knows about that
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Oh crap she's got a gun!! o_o Were all screwed now, aren't we?
X3 anyways, you did a great job! I love the posing and facial expressions in all of the boxes ^^
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not bad. And you are a crazed gunman. Don't try to deny it.
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Most people think that snipers are crazed, because they throw their piss to others. I don't think that's true. I mean the crazed part...
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The crazed bit is killing people with a Kukri.
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Eve as a sniper? *Slight nosebleed*
Lass there's nothing to be ashamed about in the art of Jarate.
On another note I actually did go to a convention dressed as Sniper and since I didnt have either the rifle or kukri I went with Jarate, I freaked out alot of people with it.
And now... critique
Her left arm is kiiiiiiinda going in an arc and it dosent really look that natural.
The rifle looks just Awesome, you've really captured the details with it.
Shading is solid as usual but kinda overdone with the pants, if there are that many wrinkles in the pants I would suggest actually making lines in the pants to show them, I would also suggest making those wrinkles visible in the outline.
Her posing with her shoulders looks pretty good, but with the hips its alittle ackward. It almost looks like her right leg is going away from her hips. It might just be the size of her pants though but if it was me I would make the right pants leg just ALITTLE thinner or just move her hips ALITTLE to the left.
Then there are little mistakes.
Between her left hand and the scope there's a gap, her vest should be visible but there's just nothing there.
Also with the arc her tail is going it should be visible between her legs, this is a very common mistake though.
In overall though it looks really good, I love that blush effect in the last panel.
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About that jarate, did peple scream and run?
Left arm..ahmm...left for her, or left for you?
Well, I kinda tought it would look better if I don't draw the outlines for wrinkles. Maybe next time
The hips... I don't know. I draw it before the gun, so I really wanted to make it look good, and I drawed the gun just afther I finished the hips. I don't, I tought it looks good in a kinda cartoonis way ( just like the hands) Ok, maybe next time
I just saw that too!!! 
I always draw the whole tail from her back, and the way I draw that, couldn't bee seen between her legs. Maybe next time I WILL draw it that way, because it won't look like a mistake. But now you say, it really does look a little weird...
Thanks ^^ First I didn't even know how to make blush, but I could make that after a few trying.
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Oh man there was this one girl I really freaked out, I gave people a choice of either a hug or to get jarate'd. She was so disgusted that she gave me a hug without blinking, I never gave the spies at the convention a choice though "JARATE! Mon dieu!"
Im going by her so its her left.
Personally I think the outlines for the wrinkles would actually look better, but thats just me though.
I was kinda uncertain of the whole hips thing from the start but now that you've fixed the vest it actually looks alot better, might just have been the missing part that messed it up.
Looking at the picture it is possible that her tail wouldent show between her legs, but honestly it does look abit weird, kinda like its disappearing.
There are MANY different ways to do it but you've got a good thing going there.
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Yeah, spies only deserv jarate -_-
In fact, I like the shadows without outlines, but I think I'll just try both, and decide later.
Yeah, I think you are right. But I swear as I draw it couldn't be seen between her legs, but it really looks weird
Thanks! ^^
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And there was alot jarate dealt to the three spies at the convention.
It is up to you in the end which style you're going by but I would suggest trying and then deciding.
Well there's always next time.
No probs^^
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LOL I think the fact that it's not hers makes it even WEIRDER.
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Köszi!
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Hehe, nagyon jó lett. Tetszik a kalapja. :3 Az árnyék elkenés meg tőled függ. Mindenkinek megvan, hogyan szereti. Én is elkentem régen az árnyék határokat, de rájöttem, jobban néz ki ha éles az átmenet. A nadrágján nagyon jó lett az árnyékolás.
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Köszi!
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Very cool! Reminds me of a TF2 mod I saw which changed the heavy into a Bear
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I saw that too, but I think the original heavy looks...more russian
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Jarate? MON DIEU!!
Nice work.
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