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Published: 2010-07-06 04:55:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 6414; Favourites: 178; Downloads: 27
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This is REALLY REALLY rough, but I didn't know when I'd have the chance to refine it. So here's this...thing. xD;It's not the best, but I'm just testing out comic-making. ERGO, MAJOR SCREENTONE ABUSE.
...I'm a huge fan of tsundere Franziska. FYI. :3 <3 I love the Edgeworth / Franziska sibling rivalry. It's so awesome~
Miles "Bratworth" Edgeworth and Franziska von Karma (c) CAPCOM.
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Thank you very much! Yes, I love Franziska with long hair. She's so adorable~
Tsundere is a characteristic of a person who has a cold exterior, but on the inside, has very kind feelings toward something/someone. At least, that's what I understand it to be. XD
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D'aww, tsundere is perfect for Franzi.
Not Manfred though.
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haha, definitely not Manfred. XD
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Aww, lovely ~
These two have such a great relationship... Though "great" perhaps isn't the word... Interesting is more like it 
And I love your style
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They really do~ It's just fascinating to me, for some reason.
Thank you! :'D
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Yup... Maybe because they look so real and so exaggerated at the same time... Idk, but I really love them
You're welcome
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Aww, she's so sweet <3
I wish to see her more like this in game xD
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haha, I'm going to try to work on more~ ;D Thank you!
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OMG <3 I love it. I absolutely love Franziska and Miles <3
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This is really awesome, I particularly like Frany's expressions.
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I really like the dynamic that the von Karma siblings have too, it's really interesting. I think that you did a really solid job- the character art may not be perfect, but it suffices. The writing is actually really good, you did a great job there. It's all in-character, and naturally flows. The only improvement I can see, aside from maybe adding detail to the character drawings, is some color. But other than that, really nicely done.
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haha, yeah
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Heh, I didn't mean to make you sweat, I was supposed to be complimenting you. Curse my hyper-critical nature!
Seriously man, sorry if I was sending mixed messages, but I REALLY like what you have thus far.
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No, no, it's totally fine! I appreciate healthy criticism, honest!
But thanks again : )
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Heh, sorry if I seemed a little aggressive in that comment. I seem to give that impression, but I never mean to. :\ Meh, I'll have to figure out how I can fix that, I suppose. Maybe it's mind word choice?
Oh, now I'm starting to ramble. Anyway, loved the comic, and it's always nice to talk to people who are comfortable enough with their work to accept criticism. ^_^
Cheers.
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Aww how sweet, what a touching comic. I really like it 
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Thank you~! : ) I'm glad you do!
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